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Can you make the mc abit more arrogant and saying mongrol

Imagine listening to Wolf in sheep’s clothing by William Beckett when Reiner reveals hes a titan.

You should listen to One thing by Jeff Williams its a song about retribution.

You could also make it so that Annie joins in since she enjoys the same stuff.

Could ben tell it to gwen to deepen their relationship since shes not hiding anything but make sure she keeps the secret.

Also i think it said it somewhere in the show but it basically said that og ben has perfect memory like when he got almost same score as gwen in a plumbers test

When you capture vilgax or kill him make sure he doesnt get back like take his powers make a prison just for him in the nullvoid.

For the future let ben collect more dna samples (makes your own aliens if you want) or travel to different dimensions like generator rex or dc

Great job on writing I would like to see more of this and hope it wont be drop or hiatus like other ben ten fanfics.

Oh you were thinking of that too I am more incline to that idea than mine

Also if you want you could play music in his hoodie for a cool factor.

If possible team up with kevin dont make him a villan and stuff and if you want you could adopt him into the family meaning you could also stop him from chasing gwen because it would be awkward.

Caster gil also make him say the classic line”Mongrel”

Rid*