Everytime Ahsoka Tano or any of the other 3 love interest are mentioned, the more I just want to skip every scene with them. You don’t know how to write female characters.
This mad weird, bro
"Yay! Anakin is so cool!" Ahsoka continues. "Now that you are my friend we can do things together."
Star Wars: Skywalker
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Alivee. depressed.
Stragngly, he had 5 primate fingers and toes unlike other members of his race. He was black where Frieza was white and yellow where Frieza was purple. His tail was as large as his body, dragging on the floor… but what instantly caught my attention was his eyes… They were the same ones that I had seen when I looked in the mirror.
Adaption to dragonball
Anime & Comics · TalentlessAuthor
Also, this isn’t true. Toph didn't have to kill. The people of the underground fighting arena won battles with a ring out.
"By the way, dear sister, I also got wet clothes today and I accidentally nicked my pants with my spear so fix those too," I told her while taking off my clothes and staying only in my underwear. Then I threw my clothes to Katara, who looked at me annoyed.
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He could have just been fighting in the same tournament that toph went to. Undoubtedly, that would have given him exp. He has an ablity that lets him maximize skills extremely fast. He could have chosen to train alone for a month and the system would have given him a quest.
"By the way, dear sister, I also got wet clothes today and I accidentally nicked my pants with my spear so fix those too," I told her while taking off my clothes and staying only in my underwear. Then I threw my clothes to Katara, who looked at me annoyed.
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Anime & Comics · HolyJoker
He could just leave the water nation. He has power. He has a system for Christ's sake. The quest he would hypothetically be better in a city compared to a tundra. It does make sense why he chooses to be in his situation when if he ventured off, he would be an even better avatar.
"By the way, dear sister, I also got wet clothes today and I accidentally nicked my pants with my spear so fix those too," I told her while taking off my clothes and staying only in my underwear. Then I threw my clothes to Katara, who looked at me annoyed.
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Anime & Comics · HolyJoker
You see... That would be the case if it weren't for the fact that there are no repercussions for him acting like his normal self.
"By the way, dear sister, I also got wet clothes today and I accidentally nicked my pants with my spear so fix those too," I told her while taking off my clothes and staying only in my underwear. Then I threw my clothes to Katara, who looked at me annoyed.
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Anime & Comics · HolyJoker
... What a dumb name
"His name is Leviathan the 3rd," I announced, full of confidence.
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Anime & Comics · HolyJoker
Simple... Bad writing
Sokka frowned at that, truthfully he didn't mean to hurt his sister with words so much. He didn't have Sokka's memories so to him any mention of his mother will get the same emotional response as if you told him that a woman on the other side of the world died… complete indifference.
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Anime & Comics · HolyJoker
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original Adaption to dragonball
Djin is a normal depressed man. The world that he lives in is a noisy and chaotic place that poisons, corrupts, and taints. In order to avoid its toxicity, like many others, he shuts himself in, drowning out all of the noise with vices such as drugs and different forms media. Any distraction he can get his hands on to safely remains in the safety of his home as much as possible. Before the man falls to sleep, intrusive self destructive thoughts get the best of him and he wishes that his current slumber is his last... Any thing to escape from his situation. Unluckily for him, he gets exactly what he wants. He leaves his world and moves on… The problem is, he moves on to doomed planet, Vegeta. *Disclaimer* (Before you begin to read, the is not the Dragon Ball Z. Some characters will be a lot more aggressive and sadistic than they were originally written, and some characters will be written more powerful. Some characters will be written more laid back while other will be written more analytical. What you know of that Drago Ball world does not apply here. Sometimes, in the story, you may realize that some things regarding plot points in the story happen sooner rather than later. This can be attributed to the butterfly-effect of the Mc coming into existence, or The fact that this is not the same universe that you have grown to love. But hopefully, my world will grow on you as well. Side note: You will not experience the main character spending 85 chapters doing nothing on a random planet where he learns to cultivate and makes into some random made up heavenly realm. You will also come to know that this is not a harem with chapter long sex scenes. This is also not the Goku show. Keep that in mind before commenting.)12 Chs 354 お気に入り
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Canceled book ^_^
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This was my first piece of work. Since then, I’ve made lots of improvements on my writing style. I now look back at it with cringe… but hey, people grow and change over time.33 Chs 2.6k お気に入り
This is my buddys book so it may be a little biased but give it a shot, this has good grammer, good world building, a great universe filled with many possibilities. The main character is not going to follow behind the Regresser in this book, David has his own adventures and is going to make a mark on this world. I’m a sucker for Superhero Books, it’s kinda dark in some chapters but give it a shot
Anything but an Extra
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