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it is a nice Story with quite the Potential and i would Love to read more of IT but the chapters are Sometimes Impossible to figure Out because there are jumps in it or IT presents an impromptu Situation that wasnt mentioned before. its Like you read e.g. my grandma bakes a cake and xyz Fights for world Domination with example skills.. but with all that Said i would recommend it as a novel with potential

Well it was quite fun to read but the inconsistencies of the story were quite hard to keep up with I also had the feeling that sometimes names were mixed up or there were some lines missing. But in the end it's a good casual read if the inconsistencies are fixed

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I love this novel!! The story itself is stable and the world building also. The content is unique. Its the life of the mc, adventures but also full of humour. All in all its great and I hope more people read this novel. I only hope that there are more updates but I'm also grateful that there is at least one update a month and it's not dropped

All in all this is a very nice novel. The story so far is really good. The grammar has problems but you can understand the content, so it's good. My greatest wish is that the genders and names would be clear. Okay.. Sometimes it's funny if the Mcs have 4 brothers and they serve him But the rest of the time it's simy confusing who's meant because it's unclear whose meant so please try to correct this. Another thing I want to say is that this story so far is something I wished for long time because it's humorous and casual in development :)