Logician

Logician

LV 4

Get me the grammar - I’ll get you the reader.

2019-10-19 入りました United Kingdom
バッジ 8

Moments 400
Logician
Logician
2 years ago
Commented

if he had failed to neglect it, then he knew it all along?

Jyorta's eyes widened in surprise as he digested the details, feeling enlightened as thoughts exploded in his mind, causing him to understand a core detail that he had failed to neglect all along.

Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity

Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity

Sci-fi · Overlord_Venus

Logician
Logician
2 years ago
Commented

self gain -> self-gain

Olpi leapt to her feet. Mana surged around her body as if reacting to the boiling sensation in her stomach. It snapped around her clenched fists. Alive. "I know your type. You people talk, but you're never the ones to pay the price. There is no greater good! You cannot weigh one good against another because it's the same thing. You've poisoned my friend and sold out his family for your own self gain!"

A Bored Lich

A Bored Lich

Fantasy · Random_writer

Logician
Logician
2 years ago
Commented

"flew crashed into a tree" is not proper English.

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A Bored Lich

A Bored Lich

Fantasy · Random_writer

Logician
Logician
2 years ago
Commented

Ground Control -} Ground Controller

And as the magenta spike absorbed the energy, she used three psychic arms to take out three Tier 3 Relics, condensing the Healing Salve using them. A Ground Controller worked in transporting all the Healing Salve to another Ground Control atop the walls.

Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity

Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity

Sci-fi · Overlord_Venus

Logician
Logician
2 years ago
Commented

withing -} within

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Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity

Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity

Sci-fi · Overlord_Venus

Logician
Logician
2 years ago
Commented

wave controlled -] wave controller

Rhachis Ancestor Strongest gazed at Vaika, nodding in praise, "You've grown stronger since I last saw you. When are you planning to become a Ground Controller? Haven't you reached the peak as a Wave Controlled a couple of years ago?"

Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity

Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity

Sci-fi · Overlord_Venus

Logician
Logician
2 years ago
Commented

sentence makes no sense

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Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity

Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity

Sci-fi · Overlord_Venus

Logician
Logician
2 years ago
Commented

central comment -> central command

"We had been collecting data regarding that and transmitting it to Central Comment at the end of every month. But this time, the irregularity didn't occur outside but happened within her." Havita Bone bowed her head even lower, sweating profusely as she felt the gaze of two Ancestors on her, "Her aura suddenly became alive, and for a moment, I felt it clearly…"

Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity

Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity

Sci-fi · Overlord_Venus

Logician
Logician
2 years ago
Commented

Was that irony I heard there?

Frey, who had been listening to them talk for the past hour, finally spoke up. "You can still turn back. I won't judge you. It's only my baby nephew - the only family I have left in this world."

A Bored Lich

A Bored Lich

Fantasy · Random_writer

Logician
Logician
2 years ago
Commented

Isn't Havita a 'she'?

"That's pretty nice of you," Havita Bone said, motioning for him to sit beside him. She then pointed at the massive bone cocoon, "We've managed to contain the entity managing this aura personification. Now, the rest is for the Espers to figure out a method for us to leave this place."

Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity

Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity

Sci-fi · Overlord_Venus