Nora_Garde_9711

LV 14
2019-09-30 入りました Global
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Nora_Garde_9711
Nora_Garde_9711
1 years ago
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I got confuse, who is Jin in this chapter? Serena's husband is Kyle, isn't he.

Nora_Garde_9711
Nora_Garde_9711
2 years ago
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I like you story. I can't wait the part two, what will happened?

Nora_Garde_9711
Nora_Garde_9711
2 years ago
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it seems interesting.

Nora_Garde_9711
Nora_Garde_9711
2 years ago
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author, please check name of sister of Lia, it says at first few pages in chapter 12. who is ria?

Nora_Garde_9711
Nora_Garde_9711
2 years ago
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this is good read book short but feel good not too much complication.

Nora_Garde_9711
Nora_Garde_9711
2 years ago
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author, please review chapter 122, lots of error.

Nora_Garde_9711
Nora_Garde_9711
2 years ago
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Although it good to read but I think the english version needs editing especially the using of he and she properly. it could be confusing whom you are referring to.

Nora_Garde_9711
Nora_Garde_9711
2 years ago
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somebody is using my acccount!?

Nora_Garde_9711
Nora_Garde_9711
2 years ago
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confusing, you use the he, his even though you are referring to a female character in the story. but i like the story tear jerking.

Nora_Garde_9711
Nora_Garde_9711
2 years ago
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I like samantha, go girl!