This is stolen work this is not the original author
Law* not Yang
Stop putting quotation marks in the middle of what is being said. You only need two quotation marks
"Well, the younger ones need to defeat the older ones. "Since we are the future after all," Claude said, mocking Emporio.
Anime & Comics · FortuneEternal
Snorting?lol
On the throne, Bumi was lying on his back, snorting.
TV · blazuki
This -> “…”..” is wrong in English grammar. This ->”…” is the correct way
"Just leave them be..." I don't want a weird religion to start to appear in the great forest" I said, while looking at the weird sight of beastmen crafters yelling they want to meet with God Claude.
Anime & Comics · FortuneEternal
Thanks for the chapter here is something you should fix when you’re writing what someone said you need only two of these “..” one at the beginning and one at the end of the final word said by the speaker. This is->”….”…” wrong
Landing*
Haru jumped high in the air, skipping four meters, before lending on his feet. He wasn't even wearing his Wind Shoes, and he achieved such a feat.
TV · blazuki
Train to tomorrow*
"Fresh." Haru stood up and stretched his arms up. "I can tomorrow to train."
TV · blazuki
Snack*
Julian "It's a special snake made with Leppa berries, it restores his stamina so he can continue to train".
Anime & Comics · Evil_God_ZARAKH
The story was good I read up to chapter 29 I would’ve given you a 5 stars but you plagiarize a chapter from another writer on here which is called the Brightest Doom. That bar scene is straight from the brightest doom. You cannot steal people’s writing try to pass it as yours.
Rewrite! DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan
Anime & Comics · Demon_King22