This chapter lost me. The MC's thought process makes no sense
Interesting premise but the plot feels rushed and too unrealistic. None of it is believable and the characters make no sense. Each character behaves abnormally
Not enough chapters to warrant let alone demand a subscription. Build your story first and then gain loyal followers honestly and legitimately.
Author please stop being lazy and sensitive, you can't hope to please everyone there will always be critics and haters. Write with confidence and arrogance as every writer should have
You've lost me now, the book has lost all logic and reason
Why does the mc act of character? Does he forget he's a bustard
Your thoughts are all over the place, it's difficult to understand what's going on
The MC sounds pathetic. I'm out
Is this star wars or GOT?
Good start, however a correction you should note in the op universe mermaids when they reach a certain age can change btwn tail and legs. Check the enies lobby arc for clarification
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