young
great read[img=recommend] {hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh}
Eastern · DarthQuil
Has potential to be great but that depends on how the aithor plans his plot 🍞🍞🍞🍞🍞🍞🍞🍞🍞🍞🥜🍄🥑🥔🥑🥜🍑🥑🥑🥔🍓🍌🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🥔🥔🥔🥔🥔🥔🍓🍓🍓🍒🍒🥔🥕🥕🥜🍆🍏🍎🏺🥤🥤🥃🥂🥂🥂🥤🥢🍹🥤🏺🏺🏺🥂
Fantasy · MonarchX
hope its female that be dope...whats their power
ch 140 Starting the second round of training
Eastern · Idontknowwhattosay
present
ch 94 Release of slaughter.
Eastern · 1mmortal_Azure
except for the in consistency in updates this book is well written the characterdesign are splendid and the world background is good enough to keep the book interesting...also the author should explain his cultivation system in more details cause its still confussing
try writing other genres just to open up new ideas
ch 144 Unyielding (Part 2)
Eastern · Devil_Paragon
Hope he doesnt join the blades
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Fantasy · RD_Hughes
paragraph your work
ch 11 The Void Race
Eastern · Glocc_Williams
gonna give myself five stars cause why not but you reading this can rate how ever you want this is just a way for me to improve my writing skills so the more strict you rate me the more learn
Fantasy · supreme_primordial
the way your storyline flows is the same 1.dead parents 2.unrealistic powers thay your character has not saying that its bad to load up your mc with op powers and if i guess right you want depth to your character but how will he progress when he is given everything just saying you should paint your own picture dont trace the same script that every author follows (check out keviascending and devil paragon;s book you will get what i mean)
Fantasy · koladeizdavid
Didnt the devil ancestor have a son named harun who tried to kill him but was punished
ch 66 Why Should I?
How does lava connect to wind plus dont repeat the same novel process that many have written you have potential to be special
ch 27 Ch 27: Heaven Sword Slash
Fantasy · RazaKarim
ポルノコンテンツ 憎悪またはいじめ 個人情報の公開 暴力 スパム その他
great read[img=recommend] {hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh}
Quest of Truth
Eastern · DarthQuil