I have thoroughly enjoyed this novel up to this point, I hope you are able to come back to this.
Are you coming back?
Keep up the good work and looking forward to seeing more 😁
That, that was oddly specific… something you want to share hmm?
The look in question was one of someone who had come up with a wicked idea that may or may not end in travesty. Like a toddler who just got told "no" to getting a new toy, he didn't even need it and would forget about it as soon as he got home and saw his uncle's limited edition 1983 Kenner Star Wars ROTJ Millennium Falcom sitting unguarded on the bed.
Book&Literature · Alex_Van_zyl
Just for that have this…
He'd napped for maybe an hour before he woke up to the most painful headache Jaime ever had—and he got domed by the barrel of a tank gun before, so that was saying something. It was like an Oompa Loompa was dancing on the inside of his head, hitting his brain with a little rubber hammer on every nerve while singing the Gummy Bear song on repeat.
Book&Literature · Alex_Van_zyl
As I have only read this one chapter I can’t say I have an opinion on the rewrite yet, but I would say that the earlier chapters could have been kept and the re-write the time skip continuation. Just my opinion though as I did enjoy the previous incarnation.
No one knows hence he is the ideal trap
Sakura looked at the five males in front of them and their muscle-headed attitude. She shook her head in exasperation and tiredness.
Anime & Comics · NiksElDrago
I beg to differ sir, you left this behind
I take one last look at Dave before shrugging. Not my business, not my problem.
Fantasy · Nartleb
Nah it’s just a lazy personality trait most seem to have, where thinking things through or even properly is effort when immediate or not at all works.
I nod my head. It's not like I can really argue with any of what they said. Training? What's that!? Is it tasty!?
Fantasy · Nartleb
"What? Is your wand so far up your arse that you can't retrieve it anymore? So you resort to fighting barbarically like a muggle?" she gave him a look of utter contempt as if looking at a pile of owl droppings, "Even muggles have class now - they use guns."
Harry Potter: The Witch of the Red
Book&Literature · DaoistDumbledore