Hi, sorry it took me so long to get back to you. I do have an Instagram; zk_o.sean. If you have any thoughts on future chapters or any ideas you'd like to pitch, hit me up.
Hmm, I like it so far.
patreon.jamminrabbit, for the last few chapters now
what happened to the chapter names?
The use of [Telekinesis] has had me confused, do you mean [Telepathy]?
it would be so much more interesting if Earl was aged up. it would make his interactions less weird to imagine since he's supposed to be 7. O would be more invested in his escapades if he was in his teens already, then what he does with his mom would be less weird to picture
I think it would've been better if Earl had been aged up, he's still 6. the fact that he's still a little kid makes these scenes really uncomfortable
something has been bothering me about the story, it hadn't even been a month since she first woke up on this world and she already has a kingdom and an army? shouldn't she have started small first with a town before getting more people and developing her territory? and where did 500 people come from, she had about 80 total at the start before the fire harpies joined, sorry if i sound ranty, it's just suddenly realized that it progressed way too quickly .
I agree with her taking Kumo and Homura as her wives, but I don't feel right about Aika, there was no setup, she was just her maid harbored secret feelings. it would've been better if she just kept Aika as her close friend and aide, an assistant
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original The Red Circle
She had been attacked, raped and left for dead in the street, but the moment she woke up, she discovered she now had the combined experience of two very different people from very different lifetimes in her head, as well as a mysterious mark branded onto her body and power within her blood. Now, follow Nya as she navigates the strange new galaxy she finds herself in, encountering allies and enemies across the stars and amassing wealth, power and status as she aims to be ruler of it all18 Chs 101 お気に入り
- original
THE REINS CHRONICLES
Ryan was just your regular kid... until he turned 18 and blew up his highschool. He then learns the truth, that he's connected to a world of wonders and dangers unseen from our own. He meets others like him and joins an organization tasked with maintaining order amidst the different forces vying for power. When he learns of the true history of his family, of the power that lays dormant within him, and of the dark destiny that awaits him, he has to ask himself; can he survive what the future holds, or will the secrets of the past spell doom for him and the rest of the world?14 Chs 1 お気に入り
- original
Loki Rising
Loki woke up with no memory, stumbling out of a sealed tomb to a message of welcome by someone calling themselves Admin 0. The world around them is strange and new, yet they feels like they seems to know a lot about it, things that don't line up with that they sees. who is Loki and why are they here?11 Chs 57 お気に入り
- original
Throne of Antares: Rise of the Dragon Sovereign
Sol was a once-in-a-lifetime genius in his old life, building an corporate empire that dominated the world of innovation. He was a pioneer of the future that would have change the human condition, but then he died. He was then reborn into another world, where he has the opportunity to live up to his potential once again, rising up to claim the power of gods.6 Chs 4 お気に入り
I highly recommend... and I'm not just saying that because I wrote the story.
THE REINS CHRONICLES
Urban · OSean_zK