Don't hurry please. Take your time and make it good/grand/awesome!
Don't rush yourself :) take your time and make it good. that will be worth it ;)
Any news about the progress made?
I was not given the opportunity to use a free pass and paid 14 coins for it... . It still was a good chapter though ^^
Don't know how it was before thou... . Altough, there were some mistakes in the text (mainly the misuse of indefined articles) it was quite nice to read.
nope, criticism is just a normal thing. I won't stop. But middle school english as top 1 is just sad xD
that reply just shows, that you have not read any of your old chapters.. what I wrote is absolutely accurate..
First of all, Bo always has good grammar and a very good sense when it comes to detail. Thes one here is not set in a game/VR setting. And tbh it does not hurt. The plot is quite refreshing and character design is good. Obviously, Updating Stability is not a thing, this was a work not supposed to be continued, as it is or was a story to develop ideas for Bo's book Phoenix Phire. Btw this book is phenomenally. Either way this one here is Bo's second best word closely followed by TPA I, even though it is just a side project. I really recommend reading Void Agent!! :)
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indeed, you don't need to be a "nigga" but this is so full of mistakes and errors that it is fu**ing hard to follow the story.
Wasn't there a Heavens Child with the ability to find the optimal path. Can't that be used to find the optimal path to cultivate too?
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