バッジ 5
Moments 94
Ra1nwater
Writing Quality- It's very good. No noticeable grammatical errors that affects the story. Stability of Update- So far so good. Story development- So far, I love what I'm reading. Characters- I believe they are well written. World background- Excellent.
Ra1nwater
Nice
Ra1nwater
Nice.
Ra1nwater
Nice. Keep up the good work.
Ra1nwater
Nice start. Keep it up.
Ra1nwater
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Ra1nwater
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Ra1nwater
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
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The Unbound System
Fantasy · True_Fantasy