Jason calls him "Mark" not Wolf.
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Ethereal World Online
Games · Malignant
For me the Story has a nice flow. It is not to fast or to slow. It has a nice description of character ability and attitude, but need a little more information on looks. I would love to get a chance to read more of the story and dig deeper into the story's world setting.
This Novel has a blunt world entry, but besides that it is a steady time and detail flow. I happen to love the different take on the cashback system going towards knowledge. Some of the character names a very similar in English, yet there details and emotion allow for just enough diversity. I would love to continue reading your work in the future. good luck.
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I really like the way the story flows, but with some grammar errors and missing background information, it slows down the process of creating a world to fall into. Also the process of enhancement is not fully defined in the beginning.
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This story has great build up, progression, and design. One of the best character developments and transitions based stories, I have read in a long time.
The pichu can talk now??? lol
"This is the public waters of the Sea Clan, even the shameless human robbers of the Desert are afraid of the Sea Clan while trying to take a detour to go home." Guoguo said, "I can understand their language. I know that their ship is pretending to be a commercial vessel. The symbols on it and the emblem on the hull that represent commercial identity are all forged."
Boiling Beast Bloodline
Eastern · Jing Guan