PiousLight

Seriously author friend, what the fuck? He's already reading the part where he was leaving with Kuina and Sabo, but they came across a scene that made the MC's blood run cold and you go out and remove all the chapters, you should have started another book or warned me, I just came across this book today and wanted to finish it where you left off *sigh*. Well the damage is done, so I'll ask: Now that you are going to rewrite it are you going to add Uta when Shanks first arrives Dawn Island? To end it's a good story, I didn't agree on many of the MC's decisions but it was entertaining, thanks for that author.

Let's start with the fact that it is a fanfic from the page spiritfanfiction with the name "Pinte o Mundo de Laranja" or translated "Pinta el Mundo de Naranja" by Da3va, the truth when I first started reading this story tickled my memory until today's chapter where Naruto makes a comment to the name of the fanfic and I remembered that I had already seen it. The truth is that I loved it when I saw it two years ago, I always found it sad that the author didn't continue with the story, since it had a lot of potential and it was the time when I was quite obsessed with Naruto's theme in other worlds. I don't know, in my opinion the author should give credit to that original author of the story if you are using his work and if you plan to continue with it since you are profiting from it, besides splitting original chapters to charge more or however the dreaded P. page works since the original work ended with only 28 chapters. My recommendation, identify and highlight when a character is talking as there are times when it is too confusing because if you are going to continue with the author's story that would make it more comfortable to read. I will change the rating if the author continues with original material.