why rong rong here is ultra dumb and go with the flow ? rong rong personality is rebellious and prideful because of being heir of her clan but here it seems that rong rong is just a side character that can be push around
i hate it when the pokemon fanfic nickname their pokemon because you forgot what kind of pokemon they are because of the nickname
no
i think it isn't necessary for the 3 girls to go defect with him because there's no reason for the 3 girls specially hinata because hinata doesn't have a courage for that and for me just beat up tsunade that will hurt her pride more and beating up tsunade is a slap to those konoha mongers for calling mc weak and raping is not a cool background for the mc when he's going rogue man
is it me or it's just the mc pokemon moveset is weak that it's annoying
add greatsagemon for naruto
hahaha it's a traaaaap
your fanfic is not the pokemon game that's why dont base it in game because if you base it in the game there's a lot of hole you'll get in the moveset
"the first step of mc is a lost how sad a lvl 16 zubst already have a supersonic attack and supersonic is more versatile than confuse ray this battle have a high chance of winning if zubat use a supersonic."
Pokemon: Master of tactics
Anime & Comics · alex02373
the author said that the mc is not gonna ruin the main story so he can control what to happen then this happen mc start doing some stupid things the zabuza arc is for naruto to grow not just some talk no jutsu shit for me going with this mission is a big mess for the story because he said that he doesnt want to discover but doing shit with kakashi in the mission whose loyal to the idiot monkey hokage
the only downside of this story is the relationship
Hollywood : Playing Spider-Man at the beginning
Movies · ihatesakura