Webnovel Author: lelisPw - Fanfic Collection

this chapter washed my soul...😤😤😤

what hurt the story for me was "Gai" .he already tried to join the ANBU, but the Hokage himself said it wasn't for him. he was already recognized as a strong ninja. ANBU are for sober people.

the queen betrayed zulong ?

honestly, I really enjoyed this chapter.

please don't make ZARAKI just any weakling.

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Obrigado pelo capítulo

thanks for the chapter.

Another tip, try reading bad cultivation novels, it will help you not commit in your story.

Maybe because you're leaving so many holes open...?Try reading in past chapters. It might open up new ideas... Try to focus more on the MC's martial arts instead of just cultivation. Try to focus on the kingdom's counterattacks, what they are doing under the plan... What are they doing under the plans. Note: this is a tip related to your lack of creativity... And I'm sorry if I offended you.

Obrigado pelo capítulo.

thanks for the chapter.

thanks for the chapter.

Obrigado pelo capítulo

Although the main characters appear only in one room.does not mean that there is only Naruto's ... When Naruto failed.And I was on the tree swing looking at the gym. There were several families receiving their children who were approved.

It is the first season of Naruto.

Naruto classic. It was bad ... I wrote in Portuguese BR

You have knowledge of ancient magic, and that making a serum to increase strength ...? The goddess of death (your sister) would be disappointed.