CrShinzo

5mth

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ch 15 Naughty Lopunny (+18)

Pokemon: Radiant Harem

Video Games · GhostGirlLover68

CrShinzo

5mth

Commented

Take them to the fate universe like age of gods era

ch 77 where did Asmodeus go ?

Hogwarts : leveling up the world

Movies · The_last_airbender

CrShinzo

8mth

Commented

Dang that’s just bad luck man hope you get fix soon

ch 14 fucking hell

Survivor in Danmachi

Anime & Comics · kokishorttail

CrShinzo

8mth

Replied to Enoch2001

Thanks for letting me know, I was waiting till it got enough chapters so I can read it and not have to worry about them being to few when I really get into it

ch 0 1 05

High School DxD: Reborn as a noble devil

Anime & Comics · Enoch2001

CrShinzo

8mth

Commented

Just don’t drop it man it’s too good. I’ve haven’t found one this good in a long time

ch 62 Hiatus

Hades in the Multiverse

Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512

CrShinzo

8mth

Commented

I’m very confused on why it stated on 05 and not 01

ch 0 1 05

High School DxD: Reborn as a noble devil

Anime & Comics · Enoch2001

CrShinzo

8mth

Posted

You should wire this in English !!!!!!!!!

Júlio Jakcson: Son of Sea

Anime & Comics · Celebron

CrShinzo

11mth

Commented

Hopefully this doesn’t cost passes to read later on

ch 43 A Righteous Hero

MMORPG: Rise Of The Strongest Heretic Priest

Games · Taydofu

CrShinzo

11mth

Commented

Ok I’ll be honest I expected the grammar to be horrible but it was actually readable. You should take it slow because it feels like the story is going too fast and rushed

ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Improving Soldier Rations Pill

Konoha: Unable to learn ninjutsu, so I had to develop my own.

Anime & Comics · TypeMercury

CrShinzo

1yr

Replied to EternalEvil

They are just translated for our convenience, the novel is original Chinese, I’m pretty sure

[To integrate into this world. The World Will of Douluo Dalu doesn't look kindly at outsiders. So even if I conceal you, if you don't have a Chinese name, it will be easy for the World Will to notice you.]

Douluo Dalu: The Rise of Pokémon

Anime & Comics · Supreme_Lazy_Otaku

CrShinzo

1yr

Replied to Chizihn

I say stop where you are and re-edit what you already have, it is very hard read and understand right now and you’re using the wrong label and us is making it confusing. You should also stay with one name for your character instead of switching it every sentence.

Naruto : Escape from konoha

Anime & Comics · Black_devil23

CrShinzo

1yr

Commented

Stick to one term man right now it’s all over the place making it hard to grasp

ch 33 Xiao Wu Returns Home

Transmigrated as an Illusion Butterfly Fairy,I Became Douluo's Beloved

Fantasy · Marcus_Ren

CrShinzo

1yr

Commented

I have honestly forgotten the progress of the entire story

ch 142 I am back!

Magus of the Wizarding World

Book&Literature · Arrowinmyknee

CrShinzo

1yr

Posted

The thing is good like really good but it focused to much on the others instead of the main character

Marvel: The Journey

Movies · AidenUsmani

CrShinzo

1yr

Commented

Redo it man this good and you cou probably work on the spellign and grammar as well

ch 0 7 Hello....... : (

Percy Jackson: Son Of The Skies

Book&Literature · SucktiferDSucky

CrShinzo

1yr

Commented

Does this mean you gonna release more often

ch 18 It Started

Gravity Falls: A Summer Full Of Mysteries... FINALLY!!!

Anime & Comics · Arthur_Gameplay

CrShinzo

1yr

Posted

This is very there’s no doubt about that but it is very confusing to read and sometime makes not sense with all the errors in the sentences and story line, some gender are mix up and some character aren’t even the right power level think about it would someone that has a sprit with a rank of 20 when it first awaken really have trouble with some weak 20,000 year old sprit beast and where are her guards