In this case, as a suggestion, I would recommend to make the girls busy helping the children or something like that... their scape didn't feel natural with all the people available that could kill then with one hit. Looking at the girls development/character the girls would have stopped then if not because of the plot.
This was the first time in a long while since an enemy had escaped him and he was very upset about it "Damn... I should have extended the ward wider.. I just didn't expect an idiot to get in my way so suddenly".
Harry's New Game Plus
Book&Literature · Kurogano
Ok... why the girls let then run away? They are intelligent and I don't see any reason why they would not help. They can read the situation.
This was the first time in a long while since an enemy had escaped him and he was very upset about it "Damn... I should have extended the ward wider.. I just didn't expect an idiot to get in my way so suddenly".
Harry's New Game Plus
Book&Literature · Kurogano
Really... agree do not disclose future information??? seems like only valid for the traitor... this is getting ridiculous!!!
James who was all too eager with Sirius always, nodded immediately in agreement. The Slytherin prefects would be already patrolling after few minutes after finishing the meeting. It would be the perfect opportunity to prank them. Besides they were all Death Eaters in making, Professor Dumbledore had taken the names of various Death Eaters Harry already knew and James recongnized many of them.
Transmigrated into Severus Snape with Golden Trio back in Time
Book&Literature · Jerry153
Yeah... and they have disclosure information regarding Snap... why not Peter???
His father, his godfather, Remus and the traitor Peter. It was so hard for him to simply not go and blame the man for all the deaths he caused but he couldn't. Professor Dumbledore had asked them to not disclose information as the timeline was no longer correct, the vow was also doing the same and preventing them in disclosing the information.
Transmigrated into Severus Snape with Golden Trio back in Time
Book&Literature · Jerry153
Seems like this fanfiction will just follow the original plot. Let's see if the Uzumaki clan will survive to confirm this.
Thank you!
The problem is that there is nothing being used for dialogue although you are using this new marks for thoughts. As a reader, it is confusing and hard to identify dialogue. I also never read a book or novel with your marks instead of quotes, so I am not sure why quotes would cause confusion for the readers. But that is ok, I don't mind and you can us any system you like. What I mind is a lack of marks for dialogues. It really makes the reading hard.
Please help to use " for dialogue and ' for thoughts.
Probably because the author needs the threat alive for his plot. I honestly don't agree with this approach, the author should not have added A if this is the end result. Also they could return to the village while she killed him. Unless the author justify this in the next chapter, that makes no sense.
Mito took one last look at A and spoke while the red chakra receded off her body "It seems you're lucky today brat, but next time you harm my Granddaughter, I'll kill you myself."
Naruto: The Strongest Senju
Anime & Comics · Kingkillerdj2023
This is worth way more than that. It should be worth hundreds of millions or a few billions. It is way better than that 1 billion canon. Also, after the attack, he should have asked extra money for anything that Pierce was not aware about the price.
"The price is fair, only ten million."
Marvel: I am selling Artifacts all over the Universe! (Hiatus)
Movies · Novelette_Seeker