I love everything that I read in this story, The first chapter hooked me up to keep reading, I may not have commented but it's more polished than ever. Keep it up, I'll follow along with the story in my free time.
Thanks for suggestion.
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Edge Of The Book: Castle Siege
Fantasy · SJCTheLegacy
Something like that.
"He re-establish the kingdom giving it a new name, dedicated to his fallen father who tried to save its people; he named it Zephyr. After King Zephiel was seated on his throne, King Zephiel allied with another kingdom; he was once one of the best kings humanity has ever known. Instead of having an all-out war against the neighboring kingdom, he asked for an alliance that will benefit its land and also for world peace." He coughed after his lesson. "It's interesting. Up until now, I'm still impressed that one person united the whole continent of Imersia," he said with a smile on his face.
Edge Of The Book: Castle Siege
Fantasy · SJCTheLegacy
I love how you write since it's goofy in a good way. The elements are in harmony that makes this story the best. keep it up. one more thing to recommend is that find a cover that would fit on your story, you can get one in inkstone too.
Excellent writer I can feel the emotion of your character in every line. I also like your world background, especially its interstellar thing, so I'll follow along on what approach you will do.
I love how detailed the novel was; I feel immersed due to its details and the way the author write is fascinating to see. It's also a transmigration novel so that's a plus for me.
As of the moment, there are not many chapters to give a proper review, but in these four-chapter, I can feel that this novel will grow into something big, keep it up.
The writing is phenomenal, you can see that this author puts a lot of effort into making this happen. I love the transmigration type of story and that's a plus from it, all in all, it's an excellent novel.
Thank you. I'm happy you enjoyed it
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original Edge Of The Book: Castle Siege
4.83
Magic existed in ancient times, and the earth was filled with fantastic beasts and factions of various types. Magic is the most useful tool throughout this period, but it has repercussions. It has the potential to produce not only conflict but also a catastrophe. Lux established a group including Blue, Gina, Jessica, and Jerimiah to help him find his sister. They endured numerous skirmishes and tribulations as they journeyed out into the woods until they ended themselves working for the king, where their quest had been forgotten. An incident occurred while Lux was serving the king, forcing him to make a decision. Will he take the road to glory? or the route to annihilation?167 Chs 88 お気に入り
Excellent story. The way that the author portrays the character is subtle but rich in personality. I just love how the author shows what world the character has in her mind to the readers. I'm hooked up in it. Good job author.
Lilith
Eastern · daylightmoon123445