Do you maybe have an instagram or something?
Yooo! Sorry for only responding to this now, I only just saw it! This is fricking awesome! Thank you so much!
I do feel ya (and sorry for the late response to this), but well, I'm simply not the best at writing romance if I'll be honest I've always kind of put it more into the background, not trying to focus on it too much, so maybe that made me skip over a lot of important things. It's been noted though, I will try to maybe expand upon their relationship and its growth in the future!
Soon, it was so close that he could feel her warm breath on his face, and a moment later, their lips touched. For a moment, it felt like their contact caused some holy flames to spark up between the two, but that was only the case for an instant. Immediately after, Eiro realised that it was nothing that interesting.
Demon's Virtue
Fantasy · DiceVR
I did not know that! Interesting!
However, Eiro now had four vocal cords that he seemed to be able to produce sound with. He could control just one pair, like he did now, to produce normal sounds, or he could use both of them, making it practically sound as if two people were speaking at once. And most importantly, he could manipulate each pair of vocal cords separately from each other. So while one was producing a high-pitched sound, the other could produce an opposing low-pitched sound.
Demon's Virtue
Fantasy · DiceVR
Thanks for the tip about the striker, I'll have to check it out! And don't worry about the necromancy bit, I'm going to try and make it as unique as possible! It's going to become more unique throughout the 'Legacy' progression, so at the start it might be a bit more generic, but it will be more fine-tuned toward Foster's own personality and interests later on! :D
Oh, simple He just didn't intend to actually hurt him, he just tried to take out his anger for a second In this kinda world with stats, levels, as well as health and stuff, if one wasn't able to kind of control that sort of thing, then a high-level person bumping into a child on the street might end up killing them instantly
Well, I wouldn't say he's gonna be 'dark', but he definitely won't turn into some kind of goody-two-shoes
I see, I get what you mean! I'll try and make the emotions of the characters a bit more apparent from now on!
Author here, with a shameless 5 star review! I don't know what I'm supposed to say here, other than the fact that I'm going to try and create a nice, engaging, and fun story for all of you guys to read! If you have any comments, criticism, or suggestions for me, please let me hear them! Thanks! :D
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totally valid tbh, it was the first thing I wrote and I super sucked at pacing back then, I hope that it gets better in the later parts but I understand that you don't want to sit through the most boring parts of it Thanks for the review anyway though!
Spending My Retirement In A Game
Games · DiceVR