Tonukurio

Tonukurio

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Walk according to the spiritual, transcending the physical. Call what is not as though it were.

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Tonukurio
Tonukurio
6 days ago
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clip clop

Tonukurio
Tonukurio
10 days ago
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Err... spelling of 'six'. Pretty sure you aren't writing in Latin here, so...

Chen Mumu counted while laughing, "Eight…seven…sex….three…two…."

Rejected My Ex, Married His Evil Boss

Rejected My Ex, Married His Evil Boss

Urban · BOOKWORM7

Tonukurio
Tonukurio
10 days ago
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Uh... in Chapter 13, there's a paragraph that reads: 'She had been given the most important scene where the two lovers reunited during the ninth lifetime. It was a super sweet yet bitter moment between the two characters and it was the most important moment of the whole film.' So... yeah...

Chen Mumu stood up, her face lighting up with determination. "Thank you so much! Cai Ying is a character I've felt deeply connected to ever since I read the script. Her journey through nine lifetimes, her unwavering love and sorrow, it's a story that resonates with me profoundly. I've prepared a scene from the second lifetime, where she realizes her lover does not recognize her."

Rejected My Ex, Married His Evil Boss

Rejected My Ex, Married His Evil Boss

Urban · BOOKWORM7

Tonukurio
Tonukurio
11 days ago
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Don't say that, Doctor! You can't guarantee it! No good doctor would say that. It could easily get them sued. Author, back surgery for back pain has a really poor prognosis. I think it's only something like 13%. No doctor can guarantee that the pain won't come back or turn into a chronic (long term persistent) pain problem. The pain may not be as bad, but back pain is really a troublesome condition. It just likes to stick around and come back in the future.

Feng Du An held Chen Mumu's hands and nodded, "Yes. You can stop worrying now."

Rejected My Ex, Married His Evil Boss

Rejected My Ex, Married His Evil Boss

Urban · BOOKWORM7

Tonukurio
Tonukurio
11 days ago
Commented

I really want to comment on the not so great portrayal of disc herniation management and the recommendations with poor details, etc. As this is just a work of fiction, I will just return to facepalming or knocking my head on the wall in frustration. Also, if you ever come across nurses as unprofessional, discriminatory and prejudice as those portrayed in the story, please report them so that they can stop working as nurses and ruining the name of their profession and all the other related health professions. The health professions have no need for people like this. Again, if you meet a bad or unprofessional health care worker, please report them so that the rest of the health professionals don't have to take their flak. Thank you.

Tonukurio
Tonukurio
1 months ago
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Philosophy... hehhh

Tonukurio
Tonukurio
2 months ago
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The changes in perspective between third and first person really make me want to flip the table. Author, as a writer writing about an author, you should at least be able to get the basics right, right? Professionalism and all that, you know? I don't know if I can keep reading. Maybe my brain will become more flexible with this kind of perspective flipping exercise? Maybe if I look at it from a brain training perspective, I can keep moving forwards.

Tonukurio
Tonukurio
Tonukurio
2 months ago
Commented

Hey, someone's written the story of my and my aunt's life right here. Does someone know us?

Tonukurio
Tonukurio
2 months ago
Commented

Epic battle / escape, coming right up. Unless Sunny cheats... hmm... nothing unusual there.

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    Urban R18 DARK TRAGEDY

    This is not a tale of romance as much as a tale of survival. This the story of how Meng Yina attempted to break free from the fate of being a doormat and tried to live. This is the short story of a modern day slave. Mature themes warning. This story includes violence, sexual themes and elements that may trigger or upset some people.

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  • Leaping Over the Blue Gulf original

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    Fantasy R18 DARK SUPERPOWERS

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  • Milestones in Another World original

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    Fantasy WEAKTOSTRONG

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  • The Bosky Invasion (Completed) original

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    Urban SURVIVAL TRAGEDY BETRAYAL

    完了

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  • Memoirs of Broken Tofu (completed) original

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    History DARK TRAGEDY

    完了

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