The parts in the early chapters where a lot of people are either talking or thinking looked pretty jumbled but other than that, so far, this is a really promising Overlord fic. I’m really liking where it’s going and I can’t wait for more.
Love where the story is going, where it’s gone so far. I’ve binged it all in a bit over Week and I’m loving it so much. My main thing is how well you’ve captured each character and their essence, they feel so real and fleshed out instead of ideas in a novel. Thank you for the read, I’ll be awaiting updates eagerly!!
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Take your time, no stress.
At last, the forging reached its crescendo, Apollo recalled all of his essence back to himself as the radiant light subsided, revealing the completed masterpiece. Apollo beheld his new weapon with awe, its golden surface adorned with intricate engravings, each symbol reflecting a facet of his divine power. He reached out and grasped the bow, feeling its familiar weight in his hands. It was a perfect extension of himself, a conduit for his divine will.
Percy Jackson : The Bright One
Book&Literature · Lucien_Morningstar
At last, the forging reached its crescendo, Apollo recalled all of his essence back to himself as the radiant light subsided, revealing the completed masterpiece. Apollo beheld his new weapon with awe, its golden surface adorned with intricate engravings, each symbol reflecting a facet of his divine power. He reached out and grasped the bow, feeling its familiar weight in his hands. It was a perfect extension of himself, a conduit for his divine will.
Percy Jackson : The Bright One
Book&Literature · Lucien_Morningstar
Based.
2. 16 year old, with short aqua blue hair and glossy purple irises. He's tall, handsome, I mean you guys already know the deal.
Rinnegan in JJk
Anime & Comics · David_555
One of my favourite DxD fics of recent time not gonna lie. I love the way things are developing and the character interactions are fresh and feel true. I already can’t wait for the next chapter, definitely reading this till the end.
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original Geo Bending
The 2070 modern society life is good, and Jaune's parents were very well off, he had just about everything he could ask for as a child. Toys, a loving family to play with, playgrounds and even a small but tightly knit group of friends. And when things got boring, he found a passion for martial arts he never knew he had, and it even managed to earn him quite a few trophies and friendly rivalries over the years too. But what can you count on to spice things up when life goes back to its old boring self? Why surprise transmigration of course! Follow along as Jaune struggles to accept and adapt to his new reality and goes on to venture into the seemingly bright new world that faces him. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is my first piece of writing that I've actually published, so please go easy on me, I know I've a lot to learn. Though I do have to say, while I appreciate and encourage constructive criticism because it helps me in the long run, I very much dislike when people shit on a piece of writing for no logical reason. So for any 100ft tall flaming dick of an individual, well, you're in the wrong place. [NOTICE for Romance]: I suck ass at writing, so I won't consider this for a hot minute, though if enough people ask, I may do a poll or ask for opinions all around.1 Chs 41 お気に入り
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ALL FOR ONE: 60%!
MHA: Horizon (Ope-Ope No Mi)
Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene