Klo123

Klo123

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Klo123
Klo123
26 days ago
Commented

WTH he heard rumors for years ??? is this the same story as the chapters before ????

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Shattered Sparks

Shattered Sparks

Sci-fi · gogi8755

Klo123
Klo123
26 days ago
Commented

I don’t know what every auther here comes up with a good story and the second you think it is the best they ruin it not slight drop in quality but sharply like it’s not theirs in the first place why

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Alex kept his expression neutral. He didn't want to show too much interest, knowing it would drive the price up. "Looks pretty beat up to me," he said, turning the device over in his hand. "Not sure it's even worth anything."

Shattered Sparks

Shattered Sparks

Sci-fi · gogi8755

Klo123
Klo123
26 days ago
Commented

The only useful word here is that winter is coming

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The market was bustling by the time Alex arrived, the noise of haggling and the clanging of metal filling the air. The cold hadn't kept people away—if anything, it made the marketplace more desperate. People were trying to secure what they could before winter hit even harder, their breath visible in the frigid air as they moved quickly between stalls.

Shattered Sparks

Shattered Sparks

Sci-fi · gogi8755

Klo123
Klo123
26 days ago
Commented

Here we go again with maze of streets and allys

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With that thought, he tucked the comm unit back into his coat and stood up, ready to head out. The Quarter was a maze of streets and alleys, and while much of it had been picked clean by scavengers like Elara and him, Alex knew that hidden treasures sometimes appeared where people least expected them. He just needed to keep looking.

Shattered Sparks

Shattered Sparks

Sci-fi · gogi8755

Klo123
Klo123
26 days ago
Commented

Why do we keep going in circles it is the tenth chapter and the only thing get a filler stuff it feels like Chinese novels were they stuff the chapters to have more word count

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But where would I find something like that in the Rust Quarter? Alex thought, glancing around the small room. Most of what they scavenged was broken, damaged beyond repair, or missing critical parts. Yet, somewhere in the Quarter, there had to be more—old-world tech that had been buried, forgotten, or overlooked.

Shattered Sparks

Shattered Sparks

Sci-fi · gogi8755

Klo123
Klo123
26 days ago
Commented

Months has passed ?

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Alex scanned the room, looking for something that might still function. There, on a shelf near the corner, was a comm unit they had found months ago. It had been cracked and broken, with no way to power it—until now. He grabbed it and brought it back to the small fire, carefully plugging it into the generator.

Shattered Sparks

Shattered Sparks

Sci-fi · gogi8755

Klo123
Klo123
1 months ago
Commented

Tiny

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Its deeply red eyes pulsed with arcs of red lightning, its face being that of a massive black-furred Gorilla!

The Empyreal Gem Master

The Empyreal Gem Master

Fantasy · Adui

Klo123
Klo123
1 months ago
Commented

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Nothing could possibly go wrong.

The Empyreal Gem Master

The Empyreal Gem Master

Fantasy · Adui

Klo123
Klo123
1 months ago
Commented

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If and when such a time came…

The Empyreal Gem Master

The Empyreal Gem Master

Fantasy · Adui

Klo123
Klo123
1 months ago
Replied to 13KillerShadows

Good point

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Lein didn't stay still. He rolled back, distancing himself from their attacks. His movements were fluid, a result of both instinct and training. The goblins pursued, determined not to let him escape, their snarls filling the air.

Floating Island - Triple S Talent

Floating Island - Triple S Talent

Games · Riski_Bambang