uhh.. thanks a lot TT it gives me more motivation to improve and learn.
The building was a part of WoS Industries. Stood for 'World on Server'. The largest and ambitious project that worked mainly on virtual technology.
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ah i see. i know how bad my grammar is and i even cringe when i read it XD that's why people who gave me pointer are somehow like a savior to me XD but still, it's quite a shock when the pointer come insistently XD thanks ^^ (your interaction means a lot TT)
"Haha, you guys give me a good impression." Arie chuckled.
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sorry for the inconvenient. this paragraph here is a mistake, but i want to keep it as it is, so the correction from the account named PaulThePerson (the same person as Splashy101 who left a review on the front page) will still be there and i can read it in the future. this is precious for me since someone finally wants to waste their time and give me constructive feedback. so, please forgive my selfishness ^^
The building was a part of WoS Industries. Stood for 'World on Server'. The largest and ambitious project that worked mainly on virtual technology.
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ah, is that so? thanks XD (although i don't know why people give correction a lot (recently) on this novel) it's not happened a while back and it feels weird to only receive this correction just recently. are the people that read and give me power stone back then just accept the writing as it is, they ignored it, or they don't have the capability as much as yours. sorry, i'm just curious XD and thanks once again XD
"Haha, you guys give me a good impression." Arie chuckled.
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the weird thing is that it's already fixed on Grammarly. with no red and yellow error. letme check it manually later. since you said about all tenses messed up and grammarly, i hope this is not an empty comment. thanks XD
i see. so, it should be largest and most ambitious. thanks a lot and sorry, if i edit the paragraph, your comment will be deleted automatically. so, i might keep the paragraph as it is (and people can read the correct sentence) or edit it (and deleted my mistake). well anyway, thanks a lot for the pointer XD
The building was a part of WoS Industries. Stood for 'World on Server'. The largest and ambitious project that worked mainly on virtual technology.
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ah i see. i think i got what you mean. it's about the entire novel (included dialogue). thanks a lot about the feedback XD and I will improve my grammar (i know i am bad at it, and your pointer means a lot and really helpful)
ah, and i'll sticky it. so, if anyone read this and want to help (to answer), feel free to do so. thanks XD
some comment about technical issues (mainly grammar) hit me quite hard and i am an ******* too. i am a bit scared to update more chapters, but i will try it again. thanks for the words. it's motivating me and means a lot. once again, thanks TT
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original Ranker's Quest
4.8
Our protagonist, 1 of the top ranked player in the continent joined again in a new game. After he claimed his reward for being the top ranked player in the leaderboard, he said that he would play the game casually as a supportive character. But yes, that's what he wanted, but maybe not what 'fate' wanted. As he pondered about the decision he should make, he found a high Lvl quest to unlocked a new path. A big opportunity for him to play at the intersection had been given, and he ready to joined the frontline! ---------- A story from the 2 virtual worlds made by the biggest breakthrough by the WoS company. DICE the virtual world networking site. -RQ- the second world for gamers to gather. ----------- Narrative: Past Tense Ch. 1-4: World background Ch. 5: Starting line of the new game59 Chs 473 お気に入り
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Dragon Ratio
Rayn Arcvicc was born during the hardest time of humankind. It was fortunate that he still alive, but he can't live normally like other people. He is being bullied because of his weak body and the disgrace he made to his famous heroic father. Under his father's disciple, he tried his best. At least, he doesn't want to give a disgrace to his father. And of course, to take revenge on the Dragon. ----------------------------------- Really appreciates the votes and comments as it will give me more motivation in writing the stories. And also, don't forget to add it to your library. cheers :)4 Chs 5 お気に入り
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Particles of Roses
Meria won't dare to mention her full name. For her, the name is.. heavy. Roses are born beautiful. The colors are love. Thorns to symbols dignity. Petals to spread comfort. It is the only reason for her to keep alive. The only remains of her precious.3 Chs 1 お気に入り
ah that's true XD i write it with my shallow knowledge. I thought it was for "Enemies" i searched and found out that the correct meaning is for "Environment" so, "Entity" will also do thanks XD
PvE: Player versus Enemies
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