has unbelievably great character development.that will leave you on the edge of your seat wandering what's coming next. 100% recommended ....
Thanks for the chapter.👍
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Fantasy · Fat_lazy_monk
it's fine to take a break from writing and focus on real life things because you can always come back and continue writing. while your personal life can't wait . so do what you want.
this is a great story that keeps you wanting to read more(at least for me) it's a little fast or slow at times but I think it needs that at those times. MC ain't over powered were most other novels does that. I personally I prefer the MC to learn from his mistakes. and not be a goody too shoes because that does get boring fast. In the end I think this is a good novel over all
this novel has a neat concept, and quite interesting to read, keep it up.👍
this a great story of someone not to overpowered,but someone that grows over time, to me that's what makes a story great keeping the reader interested in what comes next, It's a bit goofy with the weapon, but it's something new, at least I never seen someone write about. SO I RECOMMEND. also decently sized chapters.
thank you for the chapter 👍
thanks for the chapter 👍
still reading👍
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Fantasy · Fairn