The only advice I can give is that you don't need to do info dump chapters, let things take their course, you don't need to explain everything to the reader. The whole mystery behind the identity of the main characters are what makes this novel special to me. Let me enjoy it and discover it naturally.
ch 107 Praises
History · Supremely_Innocent
See this! I just gifted the story: Ring
ch 0 1 Prologue
History · Supremely_Innocent
See this! I just gifted the story: Ring
ch 0 1 Prologue
History · Supremely_Innocent
Better wait for Xuan Yueji to get revenge for mc. Thanks for the chapter ❤️
ch 73 Infiltrator
History · Supremely_Innocent
Thank you for the chapter ❤️
ch 72 Activating Their Elemental Partner
History · Supremely_Innocent
oooh I understand much better now but I still have an objection. Doesn't she have like a really strong body? We saw it when she was helping the village. But since he's a prince, he might be as strong as her then..
ch 69 Must Return
History · Supremely_Innocent
okay, because it doesn't make sense that an immortal like her suddenly becomes weak. Is it the MC halo or something?
ch 69 Must Return
History · Supremely_Innocent
Male lead-sama makes his appearance!
ch 68 Choked
History · Supremely_Innocent
First, this emoji is cursed. Second, congrats for aging one more year closer to your end. On a side note, your bday was on my calendar a long time ago ^v^
ch 66 Getting A Disciple
History · Supremely_Innocent
Your birthday should be a day off. Leave it for the 1st
ch 66 Getting A Disciple
History · Supremely_Innocent
Congrats, weren't you at like 60 a week ago?
ch 65 A Little Bit About His Past
History · Supremely_Innocent
I think you got confused with the dates
ch 66 Getting A Disciple
History · Supremely_Innocent
2 chaps in one day! More reading for me, more work for you :3
ch 66 Getting A Disciple
History · Supremely_Innocent
There are two interpretations for that: You are a sadist, loving making someone (yourself) suffer or you are actually a masochist where suffering is your way of life.
ch 65 A Little Bit About His Past
History · Supremely_Innocent
Getting confused is fun, it makes you think and work your brain.
ch 65 A Little Bit About His Past
History · Supremely_Innocent
is it okay to fangirl myself?
Project Collision阴影
Sci-fi · Roselia_Black