Excellent. The excruciating events of the sidestory has given way to the Main story(which is the important part of this novel) May this story never wander off again from what makes this novel alive. Thank you. Hopefully we can now stick to the storyline.... Peace to all.
Yap, totally agree with you here... The storyline has wandered to other "no - essentials".. This chapter could have been described in a single paragraph.. IMHO
It's a nicely done sequence of fighting, BUT.....THIS is still a SUDE SHOW,.. The main story line is NOT moving at all... A bit of a let down actually... Who cares about the sideshiws anyway?
Nice chapter but the train of the story seems to be going nowhere by shifting the scenes on side topics when our concern is still with the UN and the rescue of the prince's. This is just a side note on the main story line in my opinion... No matter how well written in its details and such...
Good to have you back...
Not really into that girl-girl thing... MC- girl(s) is the right formula... Just saying.
The author does not seem to know how to humanize the character of the MC. . He may as well be a Golem or a robot...
A bit too asinine... Analysing and soul searching during a fight? Unrealistically juvenile.... Not so very riveting nor attention devoting in any way.... Sorry! Just mho...
Good chapter... Thanks again... Maybe there'll be a possible 3 some with the Slavia Colonel?
To be honest, this has a very good storyline, but releasing chapters in bits and pieces over a prolonged period of time makes a very good novel a specially lousy one.... It seems the author just has no interest or care in his writing the novel... Or he may be sick and possibly on the verge of death and still tries to produce something towards the conclusion of this novel... Anyway, whatever the reasons, I advise of just pulling out and canceling your novel if you can only produce 1 chapter a month...that makes this good novel entirely useless... Thank you.
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