Lol. Thank you very much for reading.
Fucking end me. Alright, here’s what’s up. Story is disjointed, busted up, and consistency is questionable. Why? Because I’m a lazy writer who onky writes when inspirstion hits me like a truck. Then I’m left unable to keep writing due to my inability to maintain a decent thought for more thn a minute. All themes this story may have ever had? Ignore em. Fuck em. It’s just raw entertainment and character fctor now. Every chapter from like 1 to 22 was made over the span of like more than 1 year. I don’t remember. Everything after that is slightly better in quality. I can assure like 2 things. One, fights eventually become well enough entertaining. And uhhhhhhhhhh, writing quality gets better.
Definitely an interesting read. i’d suggest it. Not my cup of tea. And I can’t be bothered to get past 3 chapters at the time of review, then again I’ve read a loooooot of novels. Writing quality is relatively decent, with few mistakes. Very creative in description, making super good use of details. Though, the fighting scenes do kinda get a bit goofy. World building is big. Considerably detailed or at least it seems so, I’m not deep enough into it to know. Plot development is definitely intense. Starts off with whole kingdom getting fucked. Kinda odd the Archilles would just… let em live considering how evil he is, and the fact he isn’t more cautious considering he just got attacked. But I get it, story has to happen somehow. Character’s are understandable. That’s all I have to say. First few chapters, the characters you see are basic. But that’s to be expected. And basic doesn’t equate bad. Overall, i can’t say, read more than 3 chapters if you want truth.
Definitely an interesting novel, but ngl, I’ve hit peak burnout on reading novels. So I’mma stop here for now.
Incredible, that’s like… a twentieth of Mike Tysons punch.
The punch carried a massive power, defying what a mortal punch could be. This was more than just a punch, it was more like a cannon that was used for besieging castles and fortresses. A punch so heavy, Prince Neebo feels that the weight of it is about 20kg.
From Here to Eternity
Eastern · Sage_Kong
The quality of writing is easily higher than the first two chapters of your other work. Neat.
Ayo- say no more!
It’s been so long, I straight up just don’t ’ know what’s going on anymore.
As the author of this novel, I’m gonna have to be a little biased and give myself a five star review, because I’m just that amazing of an author. See those reviews from two years ago? One of them being a bot? Yessssir, they have the right opinion. Heh heh heh heh!
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original Killer Romance - Some Lovely Danger
In a world of killers and mercenaries, love floats in the air. Warm and intoxicating. It's like sweet and delicious poison. And all are affected. Isn't that wonderfully terrible?2 Chs 1 お気に入り
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The Oblivion Walker
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Monster’s Reprieve - Live Another Day
Going against the corrupted world, the General had succeeded in what he’d set out to do. With every enemy beaten, all obstacles cleared, and his soul drenched in blood, he stared at the blue sky and sighed. He regretted it all. Everything. It wasn’t worth it. He wasn’t happy. Staring at the corpses of everyone he’d killed in the recent battle. He only felt deathly emptiness. Why did I kill them… I could’ve just let some live… He thought he was tired before the battle, but now he was truly drained. None of it meant anything. It was over though. The war over. The battle finished. And his time was done. If he had tried as hard as he could in the earlier battle, maybe he could’ve survived this, if he decided to, maybe he could stay alive. But it was too late. There was no point. He had done it before. He’s survived against all odds and even against greater things, he’s powered through it all. But no. It wasn’t worth it. He was better off dead. So he allowed it. And it was over. The fool was dead, but someone nameless into another world would not be. Authors Note: Not a wish fulfillment story. I just wanna make something half decent at this point.11 Chs 41 お気に入り
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Brawler
Ever since he was born, Lucks felt a mass forming within him. It was raw momentum. He could feel it. As days passed, this passion grew, but it seemed like he would never be able to do anything with it. The world filled with those who wield impressive powers. “Abilities”. Flame manipulation, future sight, strength beyond what should be possible. In this world, a person without these powers are considered lesser. But this is merely one aspect of life that can’t be controlled. Health, attractiveness, intelligence, all of it is similarly unequaled amongst people. And well, that’s simply too bad. Without an “ability” of his own, Lucks had long realized that the world was pretty amazing. This is the story of a man who fights the weak and the strong alike.2 Chs 0 お気に入り
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Deity Wonder
Staring into the endless abyss, a speck of light made it’s first decision. Changing, twisting, and shifting it’s form, it became the hands that face eternity. Reaching into the entropic chaos of nothing, it could feel the pull of reality. It could interpret the countless dominoes lined up before it. With a strong grip, the hands pulled. Then it all came tipping over. With this slight nudge, causality came together and the world followed. Being pushed away by the expanding force, the speck faded into the night.1 Chs 10 お気に入り
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