Raspa

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2018-11-11 入りました Global
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Raspa
Raspa
4 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter! Hope everything goes well!

Raspa
Raspa
8 months ago
Commented

Oh wow! I just realized there was a new chapter! Welcome back! I really enjoyed the story so far and I am happy to see more of it!

Raspa
Raspa
Raspa
8 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter!

Raspa
Raspa
8 months ago
Commented

"kept quiet" not "kept quite"

Raspa
Raspa
8 months ago
Commented

Thank you for the chapter! Happy to see it being updated!

Raspa
Raspa
9 months ago
Commented

"he stared at me", not "I stared at me"

I stared at me in shock. Was it shock? It was kind of hard to tell when he only had one eye. Then, he did something completely unexpected. He hugged me. I smiled and hugged him back. "Okay Rin," he said. 

Naruto: Resilience

Naruto: Resilience

Anime & Comics · MelonChan1205

Raspa
Raspa
9 months ago
Commented

Obito not Obiot

He frowned and stared at your and. I walked up to him and grabbed it. He flinched and tried to pull away. "Stop being depressed!" I declared, "You're squandering your potential. Instead of sitting around moping, you should train harder. That way you can become stronger and protect the people you love. You can avenge Minato-sensei and Obiot. Make them proud…" my voice ended in a whisper. 

Naruto: Resilience

Naruto: Resilience

Anime & Comics · MelonChan1205

Raspa
Raspa
9 months ago
Commented

a crowd of soccer fans? lol

There was a commotion downstairs, as if a crowd of soccer fans had arrived. I left VJ to keep an eye on Ciri and Sweers. I headed downstairs. In the hall were two squads of Trappers, sat at a common table and ordered a beer, but the leaders sat separately and discussed something.

Cyberpunk 2077- Trauma team

Cyberpunk 2077- Trauma team

Video Games · Abi_Daulen

Raspa
Raspa
9 months ago
Commented

Having a system they will end up being powerful one way or the other, so there is no reason to rush it in my opinion. I would say around or less strong than Tombstone, which should be enough to power lift 6 tons. Even that amount is a lot, and the reason why it's mentioned that Spiderman always pulled his punches or they would be too fatal for regular people.

Wanted to ask you guys, what do you think is the right level of strength for the brothers? I want them to be powerful, but I don't want to mess it up. 

My Spider-Man System

My Spider-Man System

Movies · TLW