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DreamTech
DreamTech
2 months ago
Replied to Ziond

The idea is that the power depends on how the characteristic acquired is used, I think that in the novel it is more or less understood that it is not a super power without a reason behind it so it really depends on the possibilities and how it is used.

DreamTech
DreamTech
3 months ago
Replied to casivincent

yes

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What he had before him was not an ordinary bird. Standing nearly three meters tall, the animal had the silhouette and features of a dinosaur, a modified velociraptor, still covered in feathers but with a musculature and bone structure that made it appear more terrifying and majestic. The feathers were not soft or fluffy; they seemed more like protective armor. The body leaned forward, with a sharper head and deeply intelligent eyes that followed Alex's every move attentively.

Fortress of the Last Dawn

Fortress of the Last Dawn

Sci-fi · DreamTech

DreamTech
DreamTech
3 months ago
Replied to RoyalBlood001

To be honest, I always wanted to finish my stories, but when I started writing, I was studying medicine, and time was not my ally, then when I planned to continue, I went back and reread the story, I didn't know how to continue it, I like to write, I do it as a hobby, and I regret every day not having continued my stories, I want to finish this one, and continue the previous ones, now that I have more time, I hope to be able to do it, and if I plan to write this one and finish it

DreamTech
DreamTech
3 months ago
Replied to casivincent

I greatly appreciate the reporting of any errors in writing, I will work hard to improve these errors.

"The cold is acting as a barrier," Ariel explained. "Many animals have frozen, but they haven't died. The Omega particle is keeping them alive, even in this frozen state. They are still evolving, but more slowly. But once the planet thaws, those animals will be free. And their accelerated evolution could pose an even greater threat."

Fortress of the Last Dawn

Fortress of the Last Dawn

Sci-fi · DreamTech

DreamTech
DreamTech
3 months ago
Replied to casivincent

I understand the point, and I see the same problem, however, I am trying to create a somewhat long prologue that explains the things that will happen next, I apologize if the story is somewhat boring and monotonous, but personally I like information and justifying the why of things, therefore I feel that the beginning is necessary for the story.

DreamTech
DreamTech
3 months ago
Replied to casivincent

Well, I think that facing the situation that Alex finds himself in, most human beings would be in a similar position, on the other hand Ariel is an AI with logical thinking, always opting for the efficiency of doing her job, although my idea is to develop Alex as a protagonist, it is something that I feel should take its time and events, if you like the story I ask you to give it a chance and then indicate whether or not you like the continuity of the story.

DreamTech
DreamTech
3 months ago
Replied to casivincent

I apologize if there are any repetition issues in the editing, my native language is not English and I use external help, from now on I plan to implement new measures to avoid this type of errors.

"Ariel... so, are we in the middle of the apocalypse?"

Fortress of the Last Dawn

Fortress of the Last Dawn

Sci-fi · DreamTech

DreamTech
DreamTech
2 years ago
Replied to rocketwind2

You're right, but that only applies to a fight of strength, remember that William comes from a modern world, with another way of seeing the world, maybe it's a mistake or maybe not, we'll see what happens.

If he wanted to reach his goal, William could not use only men, so he was determined to recruit women, human society in this world was very similar to medieval society on earth, therefore, a woman in the army was wrong seen, women had to stay at home to take care of the children and do housework.

The 12 soldiers who traveled to another world

The 12 soldiers who traveled to another world

Fantasy · DreamTech

DreamTech
DreamTech
2 years ago
Replied to MiasmaLotus

Thank you very much for the correction, English is not my native language.

DreamTech
DreamTech
3 years ago
Replied to See_Yu

I appreciate the comment, I apologize for not uploading more chapters, I have been busy with university exams, I hope to catch up on the weekend.

  • Fortress of the Last Dawn original

    Fortress of the Last Dawn

    Sci-fi ACTION ROMANCE R18 HAREM SUPERPOWERS SURVIVAL KINGDOMBUILDING APOCALYPSE EVOLUTION ADVANCEDTECHNOLOGY

    The cold air felt heavier every day, as if the earth itself was breathing its last. High above, the skies bore witness to a familiar sun and three red suns, an anomaly that had changed everything. What had once been a peaceful life, among fields and mountains, had transformed into something much more somber. The world as Alex knew it no longer existed. From the farm, surrounded by mountains and covering acres of fertile land, everything seemed to remain the same on the surface. The fences were still standing, the crops still growing, and the animals continued with their daily routine. But Alex knew the truth was different. The world outside, the cities, the towns, even the nearby forests, were no longer what they used to be. The change had begun slowly, almost imperceptibly, until one day, the skies took on an unusual red hue. The temperature began to drop and with it, came the first signs that something much more serious was happening. The animals near the farm, once peaceful and part of the natural cycle of country life, began to mutate. Squirrels, rats, and even smaller creatures, now larger, fiercer, and more numerous, approached the perimeter more and more frequently. Total chaos had not yet arrived. Not on the farm, at least. But in the cities, rumors spoke of disorder, looting, and growing fear. The newscasts no longer offered clear answers, and uncertainty had become the only certainty. Alex, watching the fields from the main house, knew that his home, his refuge, was one of the few places that still offered safety. But even safety had a limit. The cold was getting more intense, and resources would not last forever. Time was running out, and although he did not want to admit it, he knew that he could not survive alone for much longer. Sooner or later, he would have to seek allies, friends, or even his own family. He had built what he could to protect himself, but the world was changing too quickly. The days of simple farm life were over. Now, the struggle to survive in a world he no longer recognized had only just begun.

    30 Chs 26 お気に入り

  • Spiritual Contract: The Path of Alder and Eon original

    Spiritual Contract: The Path of Alder and Eon

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE COMEDY MAGIC HAREM EVOLUTION ACADEMY FUTURE BEAST TAMING

    In a world where magic and technology intertwine, humans live in symbiosis with mystical spirits, establishing contracts that define the course of their lives. This universe, governed by both ancient magical traditions and contemporary innovations, is a place of endless possibilities and formidable challenges. Alder Halloran, a young man marked by doubt and uncertainty, receives a mysterious badge that propels him toward an unknown destiny. Accompanied by Eón, an enigmatic spirit with his own agenda, Alder must navigate through a world where the boundaries between the spiritual and the human blur, facing challenges that test his courage and his ability to change his own fate. As he explores the most remote corners of this vibrant and complex world, Alder discovers that each choice has profound resonances, both for himself and for the countless beings that populate this place full of magic and mystery.

    9 Chs 4 お気に入り

  • Altera: High Seas Survival original

    Altera: High Seas Survival

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE R18 MAGIC HAREM SUPERPOWERS TRANSMIGRATION

    In a distant future, humanity faces a completely new world, where the remnants of a devastating disaster have transformed Earth into a post-apocalyptic stage. More than two centuries have passed since humanity escaped the catastrophe, emerging into a world teeming with resources and mysteries. However, this new beginning is far from peaceful. Discovering that they are not alone on this planet was just the beginning of a series of challenges for humanity. Other extraterrestrial species, also seeking a new home, have arrived in the same way, each determined to assert their dominance over the planet. What follows is a relentless struggle for supremacy, a war that has consumed humanity and the other species for two centuries. Civilizations have risen and fallen amid massive conflicts, leaving a landscape marked by destruction and chaos. Although peace has not been achieved, each species has found its place in this ruthless world, where survival is the only law that matters. In this turbulent world, Victor, a young man whose destiny was altered when he was separated from his parents in a tragic accident and sold into slavery, finds himself trapped in a struggle for his freedom and his destiny. As he tries to escape his captivity, a chance encounter will lead him down a path that will change the course of his life forever.

    8 Chs 0 お気に入り

  • The 12 soldiers who traveled to another world original

    The 12 soldiers who traveled to another world

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE MAGIC ISEKAI KINGDOMBUILDING

    William and his team were on a mission escorting a supply shipment, however after a failure of an experimental team carrying their vehicles they were sent to a fantasy world, along with hundreds of weapons and ammunition, now free from the army and with Enough power to break a nation, what path will William and his companions take?

    20 Chs 35 お気に入り

  • A Magical Universe original

    A Magical Universe

    Sci-fi ACTION ADVENTURE MAGIC

    In a universe where magic and technology form the daily life of every living being, follow the adventures of Abel, an artificially created human. This novel does not have any magical system, reincarnation or some type of spiritual cultivation, however, magic does exist but it is mainly oriented to science. I hope you understand that the main character has a kind of computer in his head so his ability to understand and comprehend the world is different from that of any normal human. If you like magic and science, and you expect large-scale battles, which depend mainly on the collaboration of many parties and not on a single individual that this ultra-cheat this novel may be to your liking.

    32 Chs 15 お気に入り

  • The planet collapsed and humanity was taken to another world original

    The planet collapsed and humanity was taken to another world

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE SYSTEM

    Due to the lack of magic power on earth, God decided to lead humanity to another world full of magic power. Follow the adventures of Victor, a 16-year-old boy who tries to create his own power to keep his loved ones safe. The novel has many elements of video games, although the individual power of each person is important, the novel will focus on the power and administration of territories.

    6 Chs 3 お気に入り