Yeah, that's what I was thinking too. If she found out that she was being seemingly deceived by Zen, then who's to say she isn't being deceived again by those who told her about the Pills thing?
At his death, a thought flashed through Zen's mind: 'That girl, has she been deceived again?'
Magic of Zombie Cultivator
Fantasy · ViciousThing
I was gonna say this on Discord, but I can't dm you now, but anyway: I've only read up to chapter 2, my bad xd don't worry, I'll give my review once I've read enough chapters.
Dang, a very angry stepfather. It seems the stepmother is kindhearted though.
Short and eventful chapter. I don't even what the queen was thinking. Actually, why would the king marry someone like her xd
Thank you for reading and reviewing, I agree there are improvements to be made! And they will be coming... when I have free time xd I put a lot of stuff in the foreshadowing and symbolism, so if you have any theories, feel free to share them!
I like the cosmic lore. I like it when someone nerds out to the point that they created whole worlds, systems, and religions. It feels nice reading something with that much effort. In the first chapter, we get a helpful serving of our protagonist's personality xd and damn he's emo and depressing. But we get to see why. We also see the setting, the protag's situation, and the people around him. Most things that were described had purpose, to illustrate what the protag feels and how he reacts to memories. That's great, because sometimes, authors describe so much about something without actually saying anything. Interested to see how this story unfolds.
Oh, welp. There's the foreshadowing's punchline xd
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Fantasy · diwiz
Whooo. Didn't "The Amazing Spiderman'd" this.
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Fantasy · diwiz
Suzuki? Car? So... this a mix of fantasy and reality? xd
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Fantasy · diwiz
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original Kairo: Revenge of the Last Survivor
***CURRENTLY EDITING CHAPTERS 48-49 (March 25, 2024) Kairo Whether is a run-of-the-mill, decade-old boy hailing from a small village. He wakes up on a seemingly ordinary day, venturing out to the forest with his childhood friends for a morning chore. He expects his life to remain relatively peaceful and uneventful, though he shortly learns that life has a sick sense of humor as he returns to witness his village under fire. Fueled by hatred, he swore vengeance on the mysterious attackers who snuffed out all life in his village except for his. On his way to a kingdom to look for answers and shelter, he finds an unlikely encounter that would turn the wheels of fate. A tale of life and death, fantastical powers and action, perseverance and doubts, and a journey tightly pertinent to the world's demise. ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ main genre: Tragedy sub-genre/s: Fantasy, Drama Unscheduled chapters Book cover made by myself (4/18/23) Synopsis update: 2/11/2449 Chs 18 お気に入り
I was expecting more of a vengeful perspective, as written in the synopsis. But this is fine as well! Maybe he'll have his vengeful thoughts later on?
Magic of Zombie Cultivator
Fantasy · ViciousThing