descendants... why do I have a bad feeling?
And stones you shall get... in a few hours^^Thx for the chapter. I like how you expand and develop the characters beyond their game counterparts and give them some more relations.
What's unfair? Alucard got one of the best mounts and called dibs on the coolest bow.
Thank you for the chapter. Politics are the bane of efficient money investment. Having a smaller party always makes it easier in the end.
Thank you for writing and sharing the story. And I do believe that it's not just fun that comes from it, but actual improvement as well. I think the flow of later chapters is noticeable better than at the start. So please keep up the good work!
So I unlocked a few more chapters after this incredible early pay wall and can tell you for sure, not anymore. This chapter was a catastrophe compared to the first few. They did this, than that, the others were awed... it reads like an extremely lazy writing style with all tell, no show and way to much showing off, which is not the same sadly. I think there might be a good story but not for this horrendous prize. Especially with 2 passes per chapter.
*two passes to unlock.
So paid from chapter 14 on and needs to passes to unlock. This I just wanted to mention first. The characters known until then are cardboard stereo types that aren't fleshed out yet. The world sounds interesting and numbers don't make sense. How does a meal cost 500 and 2 good starfighter weapons 100.000? Just 200 meals? How do you need 15k hours (100 seconds make 1 minute and 100 minutes an hour, so even longer than it sounds) for a military flight license? You either don't give it to normal people at all or under reasonable circumstances. So yes, good story, bland characters, interesting world so far but nothing amazing and completely bonkers numbers. Without the numbers writing quality and world background would have been better.
Question, can't you just publish it please on Kindle? If I pay for a book, I want it all. Not just a chapter, and not just for a month. Would gladly buy it as a complete version in Kindle format.
I made both good and bad experiences with them. Sadly especially with the older generation I met quite often what you described. With the younger generation though I could talk quite well in english.
"You've got a sharp tongue brat , have a slice of pie on me." the tipsy wizard said with a laugh before tossing a galleon to the barkeep. It was at this point Nick realized the sort of people French folk probably were. They were probably passionate and brave people that wore their hearts on their sleeves and loved a good verbal sparring. Still Nick wasn't one to turn down free calories and happily accepted the slice of apple pie.-
Harry potter: The ringmaker
Book&Literature · loskro