Nelspie

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter!

Thabks for the update!

Thansk for the chapte…. not sure how everyone else feels, but im okay with sub-par chapters if it means the overall story arc continues. You cannot have great chapters without Having lame chapters. With that said, i still liked the chapter! Sets you up for another!

Thanks for the chapters! Good take with the LeGendaries!

Awesome chapter super stoked to see what a goos author can do creatively with Battling! Commented on a paragraph is the chapter with a typo.

Can’t wait!!

Thanks for the chapter! If you ever need to run ideas by somebody let me know. Lastly Towards the end Of the second paragraph there is a typo “ride” should be “rift”

ThankS for the chapter!