Not bad for the first chapter makes more sense including the excuses for his body changing. I enjoyed it! 😃
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Anime & Comics · Cerebro
having it based on the modern world can be challenging with creating the characters but what matters most is to have fun with your writing
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Anime & Comics · NTR_is_trash
+1
main story
ch 23 Chapter 23 (backstory 2)
Anime & Comics · Binirubukuro
I liked it
If you guys want this route I won't make another one and move on with the main story.....
Anime & Comics · Binirubukuro
this is your story go with what you feel is right sometimes you add something and people will drop it and that's not your fault it just means it didn't suit their tastes you should make the story you want to make and never regret writing something you love
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Menagerie and how I made them. just a small typo.
Arc of Em
Anime & Comics · Cerebro