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I hardly read the dialogue btw Chloe and Vincent cus it jus doesn't mk any sense so its better one jus fast forward to the reasonable part of the story. everything btw them is jus a repeat,waste of stones.

exactly my thoughts...can a woman be this dense.

I can't laugh wit these two bantering all thru breakfast...well done author,great work there.just some little misspelled and misplaced words.

I said it before,she's a cunning nd calculative girl. worst just like kaitana.way too good to b true.

welcome back author. hopefully this time,u'll be consistent with the chapters. the story is too good to be stopped like that so pls try. well done for the lovely chapters u've been giving us.

could seb be any dump,she even gave him hints but still he couldn't grasp it...I pity Ellie.

Finally,am done with this story..what an interesting and funny story,it wz lively all through d chapters,I enjoyed it and that's thanks to u author...hope to see more of ur books.

hahaha...I like the kinda man jerry is,he pampers when he needs to and yells when needed too. Good work author,the story is really interesting.

lolzz...didt see the slap coming,wow

so sorry dear..wishing u a quick recovery and sound health.get well soon.thanks for the chapters.