The writing is fine. But I didn't start reading this story expecting a tragedy. If you want to write a tragedy that's fine, but mark it as such.
He doesn't know how to cry! Really? OK
Can't afford to kick them out, but no problem letting them die? makes all the sense in the world.
They couldn't really afford to kick them out just for these small offences even the rules were strict, since their academy already had very few disciples compared to other academies.
Strongest Mage with the Lust system
Fantasy · Blizzard54k
Like 5 lines ago the author wrote every child born after first light has superpowers.
Right now it's 2795 or rather 773 A.F.L (After First Light) and according to the government's survey data, 4 out of 10 people possess superpowers.
Villain's Rising
Urban · Night_Crawler619
Subpar writing, it amazes me how many 5 stars this story has. The story has no character development just some overpowered entitled MC's with the emotional range of a 3yrs.
この本は削除されました。
Running off with another dude she has a crush on while having a husband is hoe behavior.
この段落は削除されました。
The Supreme Satanic System
Fantasy · The_handsome_fatty
something wrong with you.
"I know." Sirius lamented.
Back to the Beginning...
Book&Literature · burnable
lol
As I gaze at the bottom of the body I see a roughly 20 inch long dick, and if I was frozen before, I'm stone now.
Adventures of 'Another' Isekai Protagonist
Fantasy · ProjektBlue
I'm going to be super disappointed if Minos ever forgives and reconciles with his mother. She is a horrible woman.
So the real story starts after it goes premium? Yea ok.
I became the final Villain in an MMORPG!!! I shall become OP now
Fantasy · daygon_yuuki