The story idea is good. The only downside is the constant errors. From mixing words up (eg: unsullied is changed to flawless mid paragraph) and changing character’s names mid paragraph. Execution needs a bit of work. Otherwise the idea is good.
Battle cores*
However, with the release of the mass production Battle cores many different corporations became interested in producing their own battle course after five years of the first set of battle course being produced different corporations of earth have always saw more control over humanity through economy however with the system alliance in place, such Dreams of domination was simply not feasible.
Stellaris: NEX in mass effect and Beyond
Video Games · Dez_Burns
- "What's your name, victim of liberalisation?
Blackheart (GoT, Witcher, DC)
Book&Literature · FanFictionPremium
"You know there's no possibility of you taking in my cock in your little snatch," Damian tried to reason. She was just a little more than a foot long, maybe fifteen or sixteen inches. Damian did fantasize about fucking elves or any other magical humanoid, and here was a pixie trying to seduce him. Unfortunately, her size made it impossible for them to copulate, but she did have an amazing body.
Game of Thrones: Lord of the Seven Seas
Book&Literature · Axel_wheel
This story has great potential and is a good concept. The only problem being the glaring grammatical errors. It can be easily solved using chat gpt , google docs or even grammarly. Once that is done this doc will become even better. A request I have is that for the NEX not to coddle humanity too much and just hand over everything on a silver platter.
which later would reactivate due to*
Combinatrix thought about it for a minute and gave multiplex the permission to investigate, within 14 days, investigation revealed dormant combat drones of unknown design, which leader would become active because of multiplexes investigation. Several options were presented, or to either engage and destroy the drones or send a virus that would confuse their targeting system switching friend to enemy.
Stellaris: NEX in mass effect and Beyond
Video Games · Dez_Burns
Unusual energy readings emitting from the moon
Combinatrix later, would receive a transmission from one of the signed ships the leader AI of the signed ship multiplex states in his report [Multiplex Report:We briefly detect some unusual energy readings in knitting from this moon in the Chara System it might have been a glitch in our systems or it could be a sign of something more permission to investigate].
Stellaris: NEX in mass effect and Beyond
Video Games · Dez_Burns
Science ships
Combinatrix later, would receive a transmission from one of the signed ships the leader AI of the signed ship multiplex states in his report [Multiplex Report:We briefly detect some unusual energy readings in knitting from this moon in the Chara System it might have been a glitch in our systems or it could be a sign of something more permission to investigate].
Stellaris: NEX in mass effect and Beyond
Video Games · Dez_Burns
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original The Wound In The Stars
4.7
What happens when you suddenly get dropped into a galaxy far far away. You have a few god given gifts , how will you use them. AN: This is my first time writing. I hope this goes well. I am just writing as hobby . sorry in advance ,if the updates are irregular in the future, but i will try my utmost to keep this going. All constructive criticisms are welcome. I don't know all the lore, so I have to do a lot of digging around to find them. And this story will most certainly deviate from canon a little bit, the MC existing itself is a deviation in the flow of canon. Please rate and review. Disclaimer : I don't own the Cover Image. Pillaged that of google. All writes of Star Wars belong to Disney or any other Mega corporations that might buy Disney in the future . I only lay claim to the original characters that pop up all over because I am a lazy ass who thinks making shit up is better than finding canon names and the story arc I introduce( well sometimes). Warning: The first ten chapters are a bit tough to read. It took me that long to realise that spacing in Microsoft Word and Web-novel are different. Will edit it in the future. With that out of the way, ENJOY!54 Chs 7.6k お気に入り
Americans call it hood…🤷🏽♂️
I smirked and explained the situation to them. Ten minutes later, Mickey drove my Ford Dodge convertible, but I was sitting on the car hood with a microphone in my hand. The car bonnet was open, revealing large speakers inside.
Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)
TV · Alittlepiggy33