A very classic story, many clichés, but enough personality to keep it interesting. I find myself actually rooting for the characters.
ch 36 Epilogue To This Adventure!
Fantasy · Person_man
1min plank and 10 push-ups from the get go is an excellent start. He is either in better shape or way more determined than I thought.
ch 0 5 This Hero Finds Resolve!
Fantasy · Person_man
and gold and purple, but I don't think it has to do with imperfect or not.
ch 22 Soul Force Field
Eastern · Lazy Bird
Very interesting novel, I hope it resumes.
ch 20 Failure
Fantasy · Canis_Solaris
if the Priest could carve the Bones, why couldn't he carve the core?
ch 14 The Procedure!
Fantasy · Canis_Solaris
It really is an interesting story. I love the subtle developments.
ch 12 A core to be used
Fantasy · Canis_Solaris
It is certainly an interesting take on the tropes. I am very curious about the development.
ch 0 2 The Aftermath
Fantasy · Canis_Solaris
lol aura doesn't work like I would have thought, but it makes sense in a way. 'the shape of my will' has a nice ring to it. thought I don't see why he would have to leave the party, they just have to not interfere with the fight.
ch 13 Aura Awakening
Fantasy · asuya
Didn't the cultists wear cloaks during the attack? how Can he recognise so many?
ch 11 Infiltrating The Test
Fantasy · asuya
oui. écrit par un français, avec un narrateur français vivant en France quand ce pays existe encore.
ch 32 Interlude(part 2)
Sci-fi · Arkinslize
wow, predecessor was a pure douchebag.
ch 0 1 001 Lu Wu
Urban · Angry Laugh
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
ch 300 Look at me
Fantasy · DiceVR
author asked for pointers so... here it comes: -use all senses, or the characters and events won't feel as real. for exemple, mentionning the pounding of blood in his ears from fear and pain is more effective than just saying "he was badly hurt" -show, don't tell. It is an universal truth in writting, but here I meant it for character development. exemple: mention of his shivering body, and tears of anguish due to betrayal is more effective than saying "he couldn't believe his Heroes sent his to his death". Honestly, this novel's setting and plot are very interesting and have a lot of potential, but I don't feel involved with the character, to the point I don't know if it will be worth to keep on watching him.
ch 0 3 Out of Combat
Fantasy · Ripcorez
Interesting new informations. It is starting to really look like a full 'complete' world.
ch 10 Noble problem?
Fantasy · xxAsura
That novel is golden. How could it not be choosen? It is beyond me.
ch 40 Void Spirit
Heavenly Dao Formula
Fantasy · Second Eye