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Starts out good with new innovative ideas. Later on, author goes the usual rout with canon ... . For me the story goes downhill there, plus, with the change of the story it feels less than a One Piece story than a story about a guy with mental problems.

Story itself would be good but I can only give 1 star to story development and stability of updates. Author is revising the story all the time and deletes chapters already out. As a reader you don't know whether you have to reread or not. Better be slow with the chapters than deleting stuff already out.

Build up of the story is good but I sometimes miss the detail. Like he has some abilities but the story doesn't really show when he got them. In the last few chapter the story is a bit too much focused on "every woman likes him".