Skcheang

Don't know what is happening with webnovel. Translation from Chinese Novel but using western names in all their recent new novels but also very inconsistent

Confusing! The ML sometimes is called Aidan Lucas & sometimes is known as Ethan Wilson. please be more consistent

Kindly proof read. Liu Shimei is a lady, please use her & instead of master please use mistress

The story is interesting but updating is very slow. Soon many will quit reading this story as they have found new interesting story to read

I totally agree to your comment

The construction of the story is very confusing

So far the story is interesting but hope there will be some proof reading and spell check. Career not "carrier" & slice of bread not "slice of breathing".

The story never fails me. It is getting more & more interesting.

Try to drop POV, get someone to proofread for a better flow

Interesting chapter