Troden

I respect your opinion, but I didn't mind the way the story was going. Keep up the good work.

Can you stick with one name to call him when he is not talking to anybody. It gets confusing when you switch between three names.

I wouldn't mind either, but would you be fine releasing a lot of chapters like that if you go premium. A lot of authors get burnt out or lose motivation after rushing chapters.

If you want to go premium I think it would depend on the money involved, with the views on the book right now I don't think you will make a lot of money on patr eon. Thanks for the chapter.

I found it through one of the tags.

I like the story so far and the other novel ideas look interesting.

I liked your story so far.

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You should try to use grammarly, it would fix most of the problems like capitalization and grammar.

it's called the immortals wine.