Best wishes author. The Mc at the beginning seemed lone wolf type who doesn't trust anyone and suddenly romance and harem seems to out of character. Especially how the romance out of blue. It's like two different characters. I really enjoyed how Mc is smart and ruthless. Suddenly doing something out of character is like the promise of earlier established Mc which followed and supported isn't there anymore. The essence changed. Thanks for the good story so far. Might read your new stories if you write more hopping better.
Author I'm really sorry as I find it's hard for me to follow as the romance seems very forced and out of blue. Plus Mc will be leaving this world. I really enjoyed the beginning and how it establish but suddenly romance for unknown reasons and mana, Dragon, death Qi and so on. I can you want to put ground work for something big but it feels rushed and forced. I don't know whether you will rewrite few things but I guess not. It's just my opinion as reader who really wants to see this novel with lot of potential to do well. You don't really need to change if you really planned everything properly how the story want to go as its your novel and I'm just saying my hopes for the novel.
Some people are broken. Sometimes they know but that's the price they had to pay to survive.
The system didn't say anything to all that. It remained quiet. It knew that it was Wei Jun's way of dealing with the current circumstances.
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Fantasy · Bad_Wolf_7811
I like smart police..
I wanted to make a proper action scene with a lot of neck-snapping and bone-cracking but considering before guns, such moves are somewhat impractical. Gun shot is more logical, not to mention easier.
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Fantasy · Bad_Wolf_7811
I would really hate to Mc using luck to buy book. Hopefully that will be not the as the Mc seem to be portrayed smart
Do not forget to comment and review your own points. Let me know what you expect from this novel.
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Fantasy · Bad_Wolf_7811
Poison would be good you know.
There were things that were also ethically wrong in the shop such as an aphrodisiac. Other than that, there were also all kinds of remedies in the shop as long as he had money for it. The shop even offered pills to cure ailments that were impossible to cure normally.
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Fantasy · Bad_Wolf_7811
Snake scales are not tough right or is something mutated? Hopefully he can replace not limited by slots or unable to discard. I really hope he use tamer skills in scouting and fighting.
[Grass Snake Scales: You learn to grow scales like a snake and gain temporary powerful physical protection.]
Nightmare Paradise : Starting as a Doctor
Fantasy · Akizawa
The area contained a network of seedy establishments, casinos, fight clubs, sleazy bars, nightclubs, and more, providing various shady services catering to the corrupt lifestyle of the rich and the underworld.
Nightmare Paradise : Starting as a Doctor
Fantasy · Akizawa
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original AETHER
In a world where aether is omnipresent humans and beasts evolved in a way where can can access the aether which gaves them immeasurable power. Since ancient times both humans and beasts constantly trying to dominant or destroy each other. In such a dangerous world a boy named Yathra embarks on a impossible journey to reach the top by any means necessary. Note: Just practicing my writing here7 Chs 7 お気に入り
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Divine Ink
There are many cultures that give extra meaning into getting a tattoo. Many of them say that actual tattoo has magical power or the process of getting a tattoo has inherent power. "Divine Ink" is a story based on that theme, and a bit more. ............. The Mc gets to reborn again on totally new world with some of his old memories. He has to adapt and use his wisdom and experiences that left in his memories to over come his new enemies so that he can pursues his ultimate goals. --------------1 Chs 33 お気に入り
One could only say that this old demon truly practiced gender equality and treated everyone equally without discrimination.
Be the Hardest Working Demon Cultivator!
Eastern · Dreaming Through Many Cold Autumns