I don't know if I reviewed this book with this account or with another. But no matter, I wanted to review this novel. Author, ganbate! I really love the content!
A little girl getting reincarnated after dying young. Imagine how great it would be if in real life it could be like this too.
Considering that the author mostly writes in 3rd POV, I would say she's much better with it. However, I really want to see her write another FPOV. This first chapter is like letting us stare at food, but not be able to eat it.
I hope the author plans to write more in this same style. It's so immersive and I feel like I can understand the inner world of MC.
I like how you made this first chapter. I think you should try to write more in this perspective. Though, I'm not pressuring you to. Please write in any style that is comfortable for you.
I have high expectations for this novel. It has great development. Though the pace is a little slow and I see no interesting plot happening, I feel as though I can immerse myself as the MC. It truly makes me think that you are a great writer, Mr/Miss Author.
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original Risen From Death
To regain her freedom and leave from the organization, she got tasked with a Class Z mission, the hardest level of all missions. If she passes, she can finally have the chance to leave and fall in love, get married, have a family, and two cats to raise, but it shattered her hopes and dreams. However, who could have expected that she would fail and die! She could not accept that! She will never accept death! She will only die if she gets what she wants! She defies the heavens! Not even God or Buddha can stop her! Suddenly, her soul gets out of her body and finds somebody to possess. Until she saw a woman who was hit by a car and also being half-dead, she managed to get a new body. And here it starts the story of a girl that was back from the dead. ------------------------------------------------------------------- This fan fiction is just a side work, so I will update when I want to or maybe not. Don't put your hopes up. This is my Discord link for anyone who wants to interact with me. https://discord.gg/mSfPR6V By the way, the novel cover I do not own. Credits go to the original owner.20 Chs 43 お気に入り
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The Story of Li Hua
In her current life, she had always trusted him. Since her parent's death, she knew she had no one but him. But, who would know that he could never be there when she was struggling? When she prepared to give up, she surprisingly got another chance. This world may not be modern times. This world may be lacking in some things, but she had learned much in her previous life. Maybe not about the survival of the current world, but she learned about the distribution of her emotions. The very first man she was attracted to in this world, told her, "I will help you. Even if you don't trust me." When her brother begged her to come back to him, she told him, "When I was dragged, raped, and tortured, where were you?" ------------------------------------------------------------------- The book cover is not from me and from a photo I found on Google. I just changed the cover because I did not like the tone of the previous one. Due to some issues, I ended up having to make a new server. Anyhow, this is the Discord link for anyone who wants to interact with me. https://discord.gg/mSfPR6V28 Chs 89 お気に入り
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