Dear author, This arc about religion creating problem for ME. I can accept your critics of christians, muslims faith and you belief about dharmic and hindus. I can even accept the will to stop, controle and, or erase their influence in the empire. But rewriting a religion holy text is one of the worse thing too do. You can interprete them differently, use context for your avantage but changing text Big no.
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Great chapter
Teen Wolf parodies, Hope you don't fall short
why take that much time to try to explain why the mc isn't a bad guy when he is a assasin ? Just accept what it is.
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where did that come from ????
Immediately, a transparent barrier enveloped her, and a rocket launcher appeared on her shoulders.
Fantasy · Mo Qianlan
thanks you, you explation is very useful to people who aren't native in english.
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Urban · HideousGrain
one thing I don't understand is why je want to create a gang when he is already a prince
Minecraft Real and dude, sulfur = gunpowder day 1 Seriously
Your novel start to fast no introduction to the magical world or explication to why Félix is ok with a Magic school and Magic. For during the first 5 chapters no explication or stakes, confict, dilemma. Sorry english ins't my first language
Felix's Magical Odyssey
Fantasy · mcmagical