HO ok I thought you said I was the one who passed the OC for batman so I didn't understand, yeah I agree that's why his powers developed because of his father which makes more sense than an 8 year old finding that.
he turns to me and gives me an emotion of alert he tells me that the rat is dangerous.but I decide to ignore him anyway because I don't want to make a bad impression
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I don't understand
he turns to me and gives me an emotion of alert he tells me that the rat is dangerous.but I decide to ignore him anyway because I don't want to make a bad impression
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thank you the problem is I'm French so the words have been translated so when I translate I do it with the French version but I start looking for the English version first thank you for reading and giving the corection
Thank you for all the comments sometimes it's translation problems because I am French so the sentences were translated differently in French. I tried to correct as much as possible but I think I will redo the first 11 chapters thank you for reading
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ha yeah thanks I never thought of doing that
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ok, I'll change the - by the " " because you are not the only one to tell me that they are not used to, thanks for the review
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no I corrected it thank you
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I corrected, again, but I think I'll rewrite the first 10 chapters but for now I'm still waiting if people like the story but thanks for the help with the mistakes. yes I am not English
I never respond to spoil but there is a surprise in the long run
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original Harry Potter and Great Old One
follow Achille story into the world of magic. This world is not as simple as it appears on the surface. Great dangers lurk in the darkness, waiting for the slightest breach to slip through. ------------------------------------------------------------ this world is more powerful than the original. . Feel free to criticize. no harem. no system. --------------------------------------------------------- DISCLAIMER: All rights except my oc's belong to J.K Rowling8 Chs 96 お気に入り
just a translation error thanks
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