please continue this story.
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Amalgam Universe Beast Boy
Anime & Comics · Malamber
Please continue your work on this story. So far, I've been enjoying your work very much.
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Things took a drastic turn here. keep those chapters coming.
So far, I'm loving the development. i like where this is going. please don't drop this. you have my full support.
let me tell you that raping the female lead is not a good start. plus, the female lead is always scared of ml so she compromises or tends to bury her own thoughts and feelings to accommodate him. this is not how a relationship should be. this is not romance. it's just highlighting how powerful the male lead is. In a romance story both male and female should be weighted equally in the dynamics of their relationship, the chemistry should come naturally. no hate to translater or the author. Its just sad that true romance novels can not be found these days.
****, why the hell is she so greedy for power. Now human race is at stake again because of this greedy bitch. somebody kill her and mad dark lord please.
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I think its too early to turn him. that will make him more powerful for the story and remove the fun from it. Just focus on the relationships and emotions of the characters. i like when characters feel alive. So far you have done a decent job. i would like to see more. if you have any ideas which are better than mine or really unique or you feel you can make the progression of the novel even better than go ahead and do it. I don't mind. i like your work and am beginning to have expectations. Please, don't drop this one. Thank you for writing this fan-fic. Really appreciate this one.
i really really really glad and happy that this being translated again. this was one of my FAVOURITES. Thankyou for your effort in clearing all doubts and questions by writing this synopsis and story layout.
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This novel caught my eye years ago and I'm still into it. Thats something. You won't go wrong in picking this up. The humour in this novel just cracks me up every time. The characters development is really well done. They feel alive, you can relate to them. romance is there but it will a while for it to really bloom. Our male leads one of the reasons for keep going is the female lead. I have no problems with the fighting sequences. They are great. Wits and schemes are where this novel shines. Its really well done and doesn't feel forced. world background needs a bit more polishing, though its not that bad. overall a really great novel with good translation and one of my FAVOURITES. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
'Arise'
For today's barbecue, Alex had bought a set of a white Hawaiian-style T-shirt printed with a few flowers and the buttons undone halfway up his chest, while wearing red shorts that were short to just mid-thigh, with white flip-flops and a black with gold glasses that he liked.
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