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its dam good i need more of this good stuff

so what u telling me she is fu-loving is so good he is now crazy in love with her he won't touch othere women

your completely ignoring spys moles informants all of these do not require magic. royalty and nobles in general are always looking for that edge to try and get more power and benefits. They are not above using understand methods. New discovers are made everyday with pharmaceutical (medicine, drugs) all noble and there retainer know this, most should have something like this hidden and read to use

magic in the world clearly a military background and a powerful lightning mage. If the king of that country does not have his men infiltrated in his staf or household , that is a monarch that won't rule for long. The mc own people should be well trained as well an pick up on such a big personality change. (poison, mind control ,magic body attraction, strange animals or plants with pheromones) all his changes during his wedding. Who is to say he was not drugged by a guest before or during the wedding.

the mc is to idealistic (simp) in his thinking. The way he goes about things is to modern for the magical setting he is in. It is to noticeable that he is not the same person his body use to be. If those around him would even be written with a little humanity with some logic they would notice that is not there master that they know for over 10 years. The writer seems to have no sense in interactions between people.

its good my guy's just chilling getting laid and payed. no plot armor and my boy just play it safe no aeragent behavior