"sheep" not ship Suffolk sheep classically have black skin with white wool.
"Like the Suffolk ship?" Evie questioned.
MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
Games · MiuNovels
So Leonel is basically the plot device used to turn all MC's plans into conflict, to add drama and suspense?
Since he is going the distance to help her, he should include her into most/all of his plans. The merc duo could rampage across the server. FOR THE MONEY!!!!!
If she became who she was because of the hardship she went through along the way, then if he helps her at every turn, won't she turn into something different? As always, it is up to the authors whim.
Incorrect 'their'. Should be 'There are many who will.'
"Sometimes, things aren't meant to be," Ren said, "no use in trying to mend what's already broken, Leo. You'll just cut and hurt yourself. If they don't want to stay in our life, let them. Their are many who will."
MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
Games · MiuNovels
Change blunt to brunt.
Scar pressed off and threw his phone on the bed while shaking his head. He was in a bad mood and Sumeri took the blunt of it.
MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
Games · MiuNovels
The idiom is egg someone on, edging someone has an entirely different meaning.
"What do you mean not your fault? I'm sure you're the one who edges her on!"
MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
Games · MiuNovels
Three things? Her 3 sizes?
The golden pages spun and revealed three things.
I Transmigrated As A Prison Guard And Suppressed The Princess
Eastern · Little Bai Takes Flight
If only the world worked like that... /sigh
The other two people gave An Jiuyue a thumbs up and complimented, "Miss, you're immeasurably beneficent! When these children grow up, they will definitely repay you. You saved their lives."
Raising My Children With My Personal Spatial Ability
Urban · Slightly Attractive
Edit: "I knew that I will find you..."
"I know that I will find you here again!" Michael was ecstatic, and he immediately left his group and went to Evie's.
MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
Games · MiuNovels