jaclea

jaclea

1yr

Commented

Yeah good luck with that bud

My Online Girlfriend Is The Nine Heaven Divine Phoenix

Eastern · My Daughter Is Too Cute

jaclea

2yr

Replied to SpringInHell

I think he means the prev tournamen he didn’t participa in. Meaning the trainers in this year are stronger than in previous years.

Pokemon: Master of tactics

Anime & Comics · alex02373

jaclea

2yr

Commented

I realize I am late to the party, but wouldn't she already know how to fight from her first life? It sounded like she had killed for the insecure prince and even if she can't do it right now due to being physically weak she should still know how to fight and just needs to get stronger to do it.

The Villainess with a Heroine Harem

Fantasy · DustyDream

jaclea

3yr

Commented

Trainer alex used taunt, it was super effective!

Pokemon: Master of tactics

Anime & Comics · alex02373

jaclea

3yr

Replied to DaoistPancake

nah man target should be a rattata with endeavor and quick attack

Pokemon: Master of tactics

Anime & Comics · alex02373

jaclea

3yr

Replied to Hekat0nchei

as someone who has read the hundred years blood war arc (and half remembers it) no. The head captain could potentially win the war on his own, but everyone else would die in the process. He only fails because everyone prepares for him beforehand.

The Arrancar

Anime & Comics · DukeNeaffy

jaclea

3yr

Replied to DukeNeaffy

The fact that you had a typo with the word typo is incredibly amusing for some reason.

The Arrancar

Anime & Comics · DukeNeaffy

jaclea

3yr

Replied to Alvinbrrrrrr

What is gay really tho?

The H.P.S. (Hentai Protagonist System) [Old Version]

Anime & Comics · Zakirael

jaclea

3yr

Replied to LogMetro

Now how will they each react upon meeting the other.

Grandson of the Holy Emperor is a Necromancer

Urban · Shadow-kun

jaclea

3yr

Commented

Do you mean Layla?

The Arrancar

Anime & Comics · DukeNeaffy

jaclea

3yr

Posted

Short Version: I like where the story is, but I wish more time was put into the background. Backstory is basically just Bleach with nothing else really changed besides immediate area of MC. Long Version: I think more time should have been spent on MC journey to becoming strong as it feels like she was doing pushups and went from basic hollow to Aranncar in no time (even though around 100 years passed). It can still technically be retconned with flashbacks if author feels like it, but not necessary obviously. Suggestions: If i were to suggest one it might be a connection with Rukia as she likes rabbits and MC is Rabbit Hollow. Perhaps she wants to explore the world a bit and happens across Rukia's abandonment and wanting to know how things go from there she waits only for no one to show up as Rukia gets weaker and so eventually she steps in and takes care of Rukia for a bit. Then plot happens and Rukia leaves not really knowing about MC, but there is still a connection that Rukia can feel when she comes across MC again. As for MC motives it can be as simple as she wants plot to remain consistent so she knows what is going on. Conclusion: Good story, wish there was more background development. I look forward to seeing where you go from here. I haven't written anything so take my suggestions with a bunch of salt.