ShadowSpikeLion

23d

Commented

great start can't wait for more chapters

ch 0 1 Transmigration: Demon Slayer World

I can transmigrate into the World of Anime

Anime & Comics · FanficMortal

ShadowSpikeLion

2mth

Commented

hey author I'm sorry that you were no longer having fun with this story as it is one of the best I have read so if your reading this chin up you have alot of talent you just need confidence

ch 88 Dropping writing altogether

Wizardry System

Book&Literature · JeffreyDO

ShadowSpikeLion

3mth

Commented

not even going to bother reading it now and just an FYI the creator of akame ga kill can sue you now since you are profiting off a world he or she created

この本は削除されました。

ShadowSpikeLion

8mth

Posted

I'll be honest I love the idea of this story the main problem I have is what is happening. you can understand snippets here and there to get the idea of what is going on in a scene but there isn't cohesion between scenes not counting the constant switching from Chinese to English names. if you can go through it and rewrite it to where a whole chapter is legible I would be happy to reread it and give a great review.

Bloodline: my bro ace got caught in war my family go to war with navy

Anime & Comics · Ahmed_Riaz

ShadowSpikeLion

9mth

Posted

normally I don't post reviews and I will say I only got to chapter 34 before I couldn't take the dark emo naruto. for specifics it was mentioned early in the story that when naruto's soul was merged with the new inhabitants the emotions of narutos would carry over yet anyone who seems to show even slight hatred he shows killingng intent. as for Sakura yes it can be argued she is a bitch especially early in shipuden but there is a bond between her and naruto. basically what I'm saying is the author turned naruto into an emo who cares about no one but himself and hinata

Naruto : Pure Blood

Anime & Comics · Devils_hand

ShadowSpikeLion

1yr

Commented

I think he should join 13 to prevent lieutenant Shiba from dying

[Division 13]

Bleach : Human Immortal

Anime & Comics · Human_Sinner

ShadowSpikeLion

1yr

Commented

my opinion is twofold i dont want you to drop it but i do think the beginning could have used some more fleshing out

Don't drop the fanfic

SCP system in the multiverse

Book&Literature · Asorath

ShadowSpikeLion

1yr

Commented

no problem author we can gladly wait till summer break just update when you have time its sad when a good story gets dropped so im happy you have plans to continue it

ch 39 Hiatus announcement

Bleach : Human Immortal

Anime & Comics · Human_Sinner

ShadowSpikeLion

1yr

Commented

honestly if your talking in terms of anime its usually they have an extremely strong body or heal extremely fast etc. but in the real world yes you can build up a resistance even a certain amount of immunity but no matter what you can never be completely immune

(A/N: One thing I don't understand during the fight of people is that if they are using weapons then why aren't they affected by the resulting vibrations that travel through their hands. I mean you can build resistance to it but it is not something that you can be immune to.)

Sunshine in apocalypse(Escanor)

Book&Literature · Hancock_Sama

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